Tiffany Von Tungeln Poet Rhyme

Forgotten Souls

Let a shallow hold fixate your mind.
We found something quite precious this time.
A darkness pitch black, yet bitter and sweet.
You never know what creatures you'll meet.
There's drunkards,lost pedestrians, anointed sufferers, people so dark.
Find yourself searching inside your own heart.
For something more precious, less dark and more kind.
This is how humanity shall spend the rest of their lives.

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Funom Makama April 4, 2015 at 8:05 AM A very very beautiful poem. Definitely a 7!

Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2015 at 9:48 PM TIFFANY, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA

Poet Destroyer A March 22, 2015 at 10:57 PM TIFFANY, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for participating in my contest. Stop by my latest blog "POETS" if you'd like. Enjoy the win and honorable mention. <3 <3 LOVE LINDA <3 <3 Tiffany Von Tungeln March 22, 2015 at 11:48 PM Thank you!! :)

Malvika Shanker February 21, 2015 at 1:48 AM "Hey Tiffany.:-) Wonderful poem. True emotions written down in simple words. Great!. Malvika. :-) " Tiffany Von Tungeln February 25, 2015 at 8:41 PM I appreciate it. Thank you!

Dorian Petersen Potter February 19, 2015 at 1:04 AM Excellent pen Tiffany! Truly enjoyed your poetic piece forgotten souls, dear friend. A 7 from me! I wish you a very lovely evening! In his light! God bless you! :) D. Tiffany Von Tungeln February 19, 2015 at 10:12 AM Thank you!!