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Forgotten Soul



I turn my head, and there she is once more
in her disheveled, worn, and tattered dress,
one pew behind me near the exit door-
she sits head bowed- an image of distress.

Two weeks now on a Sunday, she is there-
the same pew in the church, the same old clothes.
She shows forlornness that makes me aware
her life is sadly filled with countless woes.

This time, she lifts her head and looks at me,
as tears swell in her eyes and down her cheek.
My heart is broken by the hurt I see
within her wanting eyes so dark and meek.

I gaze into her face and see her fears.
With a slight twinkle in her sullen eyes
and tiny smile, she wipes her falling tears
away; but still, I hear the painful cries

that echo from her heart so silently-
her weakened body, anguished mind, and soul.
I wonder what in life could possibly
have caused her to now suffer such a toll.

And I surmise that homeless she must be.
But still, some faith has brought her to this spot
where healing strength from God might possibly
renew her spirit- when her life cannot.

The mass soon ends, and I arise and turn-
so now, in front of her, I sadly stand.
She grasps my hand and says, “God Bless, you earn
His blessings- for a heart that understands."


November 16, 2014
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Fenn Avatar
November 16, 2020 at 8:08 PM
You really wrote this with compassion. Love it!
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 6, 2019 at 12:00 AM
This poem captures the heart Sandra. Congratulations on your win! : ) xxoo
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Thank you once again, Connie, for another kind comment and congrats on this poem. So much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Gauthier Avatar
January 5, 2019 at 7:33 PM
Wow what a beautiful message - often people only want to be acknowledged. Congrats on your win, Sandra, with this remarkably penned poem. A FAVE for me.
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:39 AM
Thank you, Line, for your kind, empathetic comments, and congrats, plus the wonderful FAVE! Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Cornish Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 9:20 PM
Sandra, one of the reasons among many that you are good at poetry is that you are aware of everything around you and are selfless.
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:34 AM
Thank you so much, Craig, for your visit and very supportive, kind comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Canerdy Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 7:36 PM
CONGRATULATIONS on your well-deserved win! So moving! Janice
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:38 AM
Thank you so very much, Janice! Hugs, Sandra
Allison Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 6:02 PM
I have tears once again reading this touching piece Sandra, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:37 AM
Thank you, Jan, for your kind, empathic comment, and congrats. Much appreciated. Hugs, Sandra
Toney Avatar
January 4, 2019 at 5:57 PM
Sandra, I appreciate your poem highlights the plight of the homeless, who are treated as forgotten souls by many, and the empathy that we should have to be a force for good. Congrats on your win on mile 8 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon contest! By continuing to place in the top ten you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:33 AM
Thank you, Mark, for my fine placement and your uplifting comments. I appreciate it so much. Sandra
Marcum Wong Avatar
October 1, 2017 at 1:42 PM
Sandra, this is so beautiful it had me in tears. The empathy you show for this woman tells so much about the kind of person you are. A beautiful soul! ; )
Haight Avatar
January 14, 2019 at 10:36 AM
A very belated, thank you reply to you, Connie! Somehow this was missed, and now I see you left me such a kind and lovely comment. Thank you, friend! Love and hugs, Sandra
Kovacs Avatar
April 26, 2017 at 5:26 AM
Hi Sandra Haight, First of all congratulations on your win! Second of all I am a high school student and I have chosen your poem to anayalse for an assignment. I think it has a strong message. I have a few questions for my assignment, if you wouldn't mind answering. When did you write this poem? What influenced you to write this poem? Is your background connected to this poem? If yes, how? I would really appreciate it if you could answer these questions. Thank you
Callus Avatar
June 24, 2016 at 5:01 PM
So lovely and touching, Sandra! Thanks to this contest I have been able to read this winning entry which I missed when first posted. Congratulations! // paul
Roper Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 9:57 AM
Sandra, great write congratulations on your win :-) Hugs Eve
Haight Avatar
June 19, 2016 at 9:01 PM
Thank you very much, Eve. Hugs, Sandra
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June 18, 2016 at 3:03 PM
Sad but lovely....Congratulations
Haight Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:49 PM
Thank you, Janis. Hugs, Sandra
Scars Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 2:45 PM
Sandra, beautifully penned and expressed lady...congrats on your placement and thank you for being a part of my contest :)-luloo
Haight Avatar
June 18, 2016 at 3:48 PM
Thank you, Luloo, so pleased I made your winning list. Hugs, Sandra
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September 1, 2015 at 1:28 AM
Congrats on your superb winning write Sandra!This is so so emotive!
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:38 PM
Thank you so much, Dr. Upma. Again, I appreciate your kind comments and support. Hugs, Sandra
United Avatar
August 30, 2015 at 10:45 AM
so wonderful to read this again Sandra an outstanding piece many congrats again:-) hugs jan xx
Haight Avatar
September 9, 2015 at 2:39 PM
Thank you again, Jan, for visiting my poem again and for your congrats. Hugs, Sandra
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December 26, 2014 at 9:22 PM
Sandra, CONGRATS on your win, in Giorgio A. V's contest... Take Care ~LINDA
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:50 PM
this was so so moving - a 7 from me - congrats on your win:-) hugs jan x
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:24 PM
Hi Jan, thank you so much for your congrats and support. Hugs, Sandra
Mehta Avatar
December 17, 2014 at 4:51 AM
Very touchy but enjoyable tale, congratulations on the win,
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:25 PM
Thank you, Dr. Ram, for your congratulations. Sandra
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December 16, 2014 at 9:06 PM
Oh Sandra, this is so beautiful. This is my kind of poetry but I'm sure you know that. Another shared podium with you made me smile. Definitely a seven and favourite. I'm just sad I didn't see this sooner. Congratulations on your great win.
Haight Avatar
December 18, 2014 at 8:26 PM
Thank you, Brenda. Yes, I was happy to share the spotlight again with you! Thanks for your congrats and support. Hugs, Sandra
Stoner Jr Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 3:26 PM
congratulations Sandra again another fine win, well done
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Thank you, Robert! Sandra
Kayode Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 1:40 PM
You did a great work here Sandra and honestly your Poem brings me close to tear; congrats on this great work...huggs
Haight Avatar
December 16, 2014 at 8:48 PM
Hi Kayod5, thank you so much for stopping by with your congratulations and nice comment. I really appreciate it! Hugs, Sandra
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November 18, 2014 at 2:33 AM
Very nice poem Sandra! Truly enjoyed it. Good luck in the contest! A 7 from me! :) love and hugs! xxxxx D.
Haight Avatar
November 19, 2014 at 5:51 PM
Hi Dorian, thank you so much for your support and best wishes for the contest. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra
Lamoureux Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 5:00 PM
Another wonderful piece of writing. The story was truly moving.
Haight Avatar
November 17, 2014 at 7:11 PM
Richard, so nice of you to stop by with your positive comment. I really am happy that you enjoyed my poem. Thanks so much. Sandra
Carney Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:29 AM
This is a marvelous poem written in flawless iambic pentameter. Simply a beautiful sight to behold. You know it's true, we do talk most in this form of meter, yet not so easy to quill it to parchment. The thing I liked the most is how well you developed the story, each stanza added to this poignant story, and it closed with truth. There were a couple quirky lines that worked but I think can be improved. Let me know if you wish me to site them. Very good effort. Thomas
Haight Avatar
November 16, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Thomas, thank you so much for your positive comments. Iambic forms are my favorite to work with. Yes, by all means point out the lines which you see might be improved. Sandra
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