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Forgotten Soul

The cost of blame and resentment

The dead weight
Of abandon
Upon those
Who broke her heart,

The branches
Of the willow
Of the
Mystiek moon
Revealing the

To look
For the way
To be free of
Lone soul
Had loved no one

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 07.02.10

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Date: 7/6/2010 6:44:00 PM
What a creative perspective. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2010 3:02:00 PM
this is very beautiful!
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Date: 7/4/2010 3:14:00 PM
... a good write, keep writing ... Canny
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Date: 7/4/2010 8:43:00 AM
A great poem, congrats Caroline Cécile! Auch die Form gefällt mir sehr gut! Danke auch für die freundlichen Kommentare...Have a nice week und Alles Gute!...Gert
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:04:00 PM
i would find you a better english teacher than a poet. to you it seems the only pleasure in writing is the tedious aspect of analysis. sometimes the point of a poem, as with any art, is to merely evoke an emotional response not be picked at like carrion so i can feel comfortable that i "know what it means". if you insist on degrading my work in such a manner i would ask you to never read it again. good day.
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Date: 7/3/2010 2:00:00 PM
Incredible lanterne, Caroline. How sad when someone dies without having experienced love. And, of course, people often shift the blame of their broken hearts to others. Sad, but so true. Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 7/3/2010 6:52:00 AM
This one is great Caroline!
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Date: 7/3/2010 4:44:00 AM
I enjoyed this brilliant write on the soul forgotten
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