Forgotten Soul

The cost of blame and resentment


Lost
Under
The dead weight
Of abandon
Blamed
Her
Sadness
Upon those
Who broke her heart,
Closed.

Frost
Upon
The branches
Of the willow
Tranced
Sight
Of the
Mystiek moon
Revealing the
Gloom.

Rose
To look
For the way
To be free of
pain
Ghost
Lone soul
Forgotten
Had loved no one
Lost.

By CarolineCécile
Copyright © 07.02.10

angstdeathdepressionlosssadlanterne

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Date: 7/6/2010 6:44:00 PM

What a creative perspective. Nice use of imagery. Thank you for sharing your poem with us and for your kind words on mine. Karen

David Byrne

Date: 7/6/2010 3:02:00 PM

this is very beautiful!

Canny Amah

Date: 7/4/2010 3:14:00 PM

... a good write, keep writing ... Canny

Gert W. Knop

Date: 7/4/2010 8:43:00 AM

A great poem, congrats Caroline Cécile! Auch die Form gefällt mir sehr gut! Danke auch für die freundlichen Kommentare...Have a nice week und Alles Gute!...Gert

Patrick Wakefield

Date: 7/3/2010 4:04:00 PM

i would find you a better english teacher than a poet. to you it seems the only pleasure in writing is the tedious aspect of analysis. sometimes the point of a poem, as with any art, is to merely evoke an emotional response not be picked at like carrion so i can feel comfortable that i "know what it means". if you insist on degrading my work in such a manner i would ask you to never read it again. good day.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/3/2010 2:00:00 PM

Incredible lanterne, Caroline. How sad when someone dies without having experienced love. And, of course, people often shift the blame of their broken hearts to others. Sad, but so true. Great work, my friend. Love, Carolyn

David Byrne

Date: 7/3/2010 6:52:00 AM

This one is great Caroline!