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July 15, 2024

Paint A Picture Contest (5 words in each line, 5 lines)

Sponsor: Joseph May

Forgotten Era

Memory of a forgotten era,
an ornate machine brings back,
reminisce past with deep yearning,
a chime, a song, embedded
in yester-years' faded charm!

PICTURE 4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2024

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May Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 10:33 AM
Congrats on your win Malabika, Very nicely penned
Goldsmith Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 9:03 AM
Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about your "Forgotten Era" write again. Guess kids today would not know how to use this. Have a great day writing away..................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 18, 2024 at 9:06 AM
Thank you, Paula. You made my day with your beautiful words. I would love to have this antique at my bedside! Love ~
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 11:00 AM
Hello Mala, you know mala, I would like this phone . I like the style of this phone. I would like to own this phone as an ornament. Friendship and Love, /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 3:29 PM
Hello Mala, i sent you a soup mail. I would love to own a phone like that. Love, //Darlene
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 16, 2024 at 12:28 PM
You are right, Darlene - I love this phone too! Wish you and I both had one! Love ~ Mala
One Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 2:25 PM
Very clever and it is nice to see someone choose this image.. you have used five lines and five words really well..
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 4:05 PM
Thank you, Dear SO. Delighted to see your comment - very precious!
Goldsmith Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 12:39 PM
I enjoyed reading about your "Forgotten Era" write. What a great ending/old picture. "Good Luck"  Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away.....................
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 1:40 PM
Thank you, Paula. After reading yours, I understand I made a mistake in the number of the picture. Mine is #4, not #3. Hope Joseph hasn't already N/A'd mine.
Ray Choudhury Avatar
July 15, 2024 at 1:24 PM
Thank you, Paula. I am attempting only short poems for now. Looking forward to read yours!
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