Forgotten Era

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July 15, 2024

Paint A Picture Contest (5 words in each line, 5 lines)

Sponsor: Joseph May

Memory of a forgotten era, an ornate machine brings back, reminisce past with deep yearning, a chime, a song, embedded in yester-years' faded charm! PICTURE 4

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Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2024 10:33:00 AM

Congrats on your win Malabika, Very nicely penned

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/18/2024 9:03:00 AM

Back with Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading about your "Forgotten Era" write again. Guess kids today would not know how to use this. Have a great day writing away..................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/18/2024 9:06:00 AM

Thank you, Paula. You made my day with your beautiful words. I would love to have this antique at my bedside! Love ~

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/16/2024 11:00:00 AM

Hello Mala, you know mala, I would like this phone . I like the style of this phone. I would like to own this phone as an ornament. Friendship and Love, /Darlene/

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/16/2024 3:29:00 PM

Hello Mala, i sent you a soup mail. I would love to own a phone like that. Love, //Darlene

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/16/2024 12:28:00 PM

You are right, Darlene - I love this phone too! Wish you and I both had one! Love ~ Mala

Silent One

Date: 7/15/2024 2:25:00 PM

Very clever and it is nice to see someone choose this image.. you have used five lines and five words really well..

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2024 4:05:00 PM

Thank you, Dear SO. Delighted to see your comment - very precious!

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 7/15/2024 12:39:00 PM

I enjoyed reading about your "Forgotten Era" write. What a great ending/old picture. "Good Luck" Looks like we both did this one. Have a blessed day writing away.....................

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2024 1:40:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. After reading yours, I understand I made a mistake in the number of the picture. Mine is #4, not #3. Hope Joseph hasn't already N/A'd mine.

Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 7/15/2024 1:24:00 PM

Thank you, Paula. I am attempting only short poems for now. Looking forward to read yours!