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Forgotten By Time

Lying in a field forgotten by time, beauty on the surface keeps the truth blind. Grass covering a man without a soul, etched words begin a story sadly untold. A soldier sent to fight another man's war, left his family home and traveled afar. He found his fate at the end of a gun, life filled with promise now over and done. He returned home with plenty of glory, a solemn end to this young Hero's story. Proud parents mourned as they buried their son, joy left in the past, in the future there's none. Many years have passed and left behind, a story in a field forgotten by time. 4/18/19

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Date: 4/26/2019 4:54:00 PM
All persons famous or infamous are forgotten in time but every now and then an incident flashes your mind and you remember. It means you are not forgotten, Wren.
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Date: 4/20/2019 9:31:00 PM
Such a common theme of poetry, yet your poem stands unique in piercing the soul of the reader with pain, family of a martyr, a loss that forever is mourned. Very powerful write Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 4/20/2019 10:10:00 PM
Thank you Debjani your comments are greatly appreciated! Have wonderful evening my friend!
Date: 4/20/2019 8:52:00 AM
Beautiful, sad, true. Well done.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 4/20/2019 5:32:00 PM
Thank you P.S. Have wonderful Easter Sunday my friend!
Date: 4/19/2019 6:03:00 PM
Sadly so true and revealing is your poem..well written, Wren.
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Wren Rushing
Date: 4/20/2019 5:31:00 PM
Thank you Vijay have blessed day my friend!

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