Forgotten

I have not lost hope
But my way
Living too long in dreams
Of yesterday
Death has come to visit, 
many years ago
Yet I still breathe
The echoing pain 
Of your loss once more
This hour, I beg you
Take my hand, lead me away
And let me lay beside you
Beneath the earth, I will stay.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2008

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Brown Avatar
April 19, 2010 at 3:22 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Reem. Love, Carol
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April 18, 2010 at 3:07 PM
The emotions comes through your words in a heartfelt way. Congratulations on having your poem featured. Keep on writing! Karen
Shokry Avatar
January 11, 2009 at 10:47 AM
Nice lyric one Reem , why don't you write any more????
Yamin Avatar
October 27, 2008 at 6:03 PM
Beautiful poem expressing the depth of agony and pain. Touches the heart. Thanks also for your encouraging comments on my poem The Defaulter featured this week. -Mohammad
Richards Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 6:41 PM
This just takes one to such a sad place of lost love....wow...brings tears to the eyes. ....Good writing...Carrie
Jordan Avatar
September 2, 2008 at 2:20 PM
Very good rhyme in this most beautiful poem - God Bless
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