Forgive Me

I squeeze the sky out but not one star appears,
as I work through the metaphors of my fears.
My grammar never seemed to be enough, 
living a cosmic life so unbalanced and tough, 
so I rewrite my anecdotes to replace my tears.

Each connotation accepts nothing but resistance, 
each creation has been abused by its existence. 
Scribbling on parchment with a broken quill, 
I’ve lost all my pride and given in to free will. 
I need not days of apathy, but persistence.

Forgive me; with your tender heart I’ve been lazy,
I’ve been raptured, but you always did amaze me. 
Screaming to those stars that never did find devotion,
my beautiful scars have gathered all their emotion. 
Now I am embraced by the stoic and crazy. 

Forgive me for surfacing the part of you that died, 
I held your hand and descended as you cried.
I am lost in a circled room under the moon’s softness, 
feeding off the intermission of being a witness. 
I've lost love; now I'm just anguish personified. 



NA LATE MAR 2018 PREMIERE CONTEST	
Judged: March 24, 2018

Written: March 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2018 at 6:08 AM
Eloquent rhythmic, and sad, xo, congrats!
Gauthier Avatar
May 10, 2018 at 10:41 PM
Lovely, Laura. Beautiful.
Murray Avatar
March 31, 2018 at 12:02 PM
My favourite form. So well done Laura.
Green Avatar
March 24, 2018 at 5:58 PM
Nicely crafted, I really enjoyed this. The meter had me singing as I read.
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