Forgive

forgive an walk, talk this talk, get rid of the nagging pain, yes poetry does squeak n squalk, when loves thoughts sear again, but catch her eye, straight as a die, don't let her get away, the hunters eye, transfix and try, till laughter's here again... thank you Russells Sivey, "Horrible Woman." Don

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Robin Davis

Date: 9/23/2013 5:29:00 PM

This is a strong and powerful write. Very deep and emotional. The reader can feel your anguish. Good job

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/24/2012 10:33:00 PM

Don... a wonderful poem... forgive..is also works like medicine..when needed... good one..always..pd

Don Johnson
Date: 2/24/2012 11:16:00 PM

2 alternatives ...burning hatred ...or just forgive...in the long term hatred hurts yourself, as i have seen in my friends and brother... thank you p.d.....

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/24/2012 9:15:00 PM

Wow Don, this little write is better than the one that inspired you to write this! This is a special poem especially the line, "but catch her eye, straight as a die," this is a wonderful line! I enjoyed this write so very much tonight my friend! Great Work!!