Don Johnson Poet Rhyme

Forgive

forgive an walk,
 talk this talk, 
get rid of the nagging pain, 
yes poetry does squeak n squalk, 
when loves thoughts sear again, 
but catch her eye, straight as a die, 
don't let her get away, 
the hunters eye, transfix and try, 
till laughter's here again... 

thank you Russells Sivey, 
"Horrible Woman." 

Don

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Robin Davis September 23, 2013 at 5:29 PM This is a strong and powerful write. Very deep and emotional. The reader can feel your anguish. Good job

Poet Destroyer A February 24, 2012 at 10:33 PM Don... a wonderful poem... forgive..is also works like medicine..when needed... good one..always..pd Don Johnson February 24, 2012 at 11:16 PM 2 alternatives ...burning hatred ...or just forgive...in the long term hatred hurts yourself, as i have seen in my friends and brother... thank you p.d.....

Russell Sivey February 24, 2012 at 9:15 PM Wow Don, this little write is better than the one that inspired you to write this! This is a special poem especially the line, "but catch her eye, straight as a die," this is a wonderful line! I enjoyed this write so very much tonight my friend! Great Work!!