Forgetting

When I see u I have no worries,
When I'm with you I remember nothing,
When I'm with you I am something,
When you are far I day dream where ever you are,
Because, being next to you there is no dark,
Before you came along I remembered all the worries in the
world,
Now that you are in my life you leave me forgetting.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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June 26, 2010 at 10:14 AM
This is an excellent poem regarding one's memory. I like how the piece flows and the imagery it sends. Being wrapped in love certainly leaves the mind black except for the moment. Great job! Joseph
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