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Forgetting

When I see u I have no worries, When I'm with you I remember nothing, When I'm with you I am something, When you are far I day dream where ever you are, Because, being next to you there is no dark, Before you came along I remembered all the worries in the world, Now that you are in my life you leave me forgetting.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/26/2010 10:14:00 AM
This is an excellent poem regarding one's memory. I like how the piece flows and the imagery it sends. Being wrapped in love certainly leaves the mind black except for the moment. Great job! Joseph
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