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Forget Me Not

five petals show charms 
                                      blue bloom in yellow center  
                                           says forget me not

Copyright © Bl Devnath | Year Posted 2016

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Andrea Dietrich

May 20, 2016 at 8:41 PM

This is FANTASTIC, BL. One of your very best. If there is only one blue bloom in the center, you should say blue BLOOM. If more than one, you should change says to SAY.

May 21, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks for reminding me. Typo is corrected. Thanks for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

May 20, 2016 at 8:08 PM

BL, wonderful haiku.

May 21, 2016 at 11:12 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl

May 20, 2016 at 5:22 PM

Your poetry says the same to me Bl, love this haiku

May 20, 2016 at 5:47 PM

i will never forget you, guaranteed my lovely friend. Your are my genius lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

May 20, 2016 at 4:11 PM

- Beautiful haiku, dear friend Bl - (7) - Answer: NEVER - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

May 20, 2016 at 5:46 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

May 20, 2016 at 3:34 PM

Forget me nots are beautiful flowers, BL and your words will be remembered:) ~ Best regards // paul

May 20, 2016 at 3:36 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with credit. Loved always, bl

May 20, 2016 at 1:06 PM

Need to remember so charming.

May 20, 2016 at 2:28 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl

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