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Forget Me Not

five petals show charms blue bloom in yellow center says forget me not

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/20/2016 8:41:00 PM

This is FANTASTIC, BL. One of your very best. If there is only one blue bloom in the center, you should say blue BLOOM. If more than one, you should change says to SAY.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thanks for reminding me. Typo is corrected. Thanks for your beautiful comment. Loved always, bl

Lenny Gazbowski

Date: 5/20/2016 8:08:00 PM

BL, wonderful haiku.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/21/2016 11:12:00 AM

Thanks my lovely friend for your wonderful comment. Loved always, bl

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/20/2016 5:22:00 PM

Your poetry says the same to me Bl, love this haiku

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/20/2016 5:47:00 PM

i will never forget you, guaranteed my lovely friend. Your are my genius lovely friend. Loved always, bl

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/20/2016 4:11:00 PM

- Beautiful haiku, dear friend Bl - (7) - Answer: NEVER - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/20/2016 5:46:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment and for beautiful 7. Loved always, bl

Paul Callus

Date: 5/20/2016 3:34:00 PM

Forget me nots are beautiful flowers, BL and your words will be remembered:) ~ Best regards // paul

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/20/2016 3:36:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your beautiful comment with credit. Loved always, bl

Deepak Chalise

Date: 5/20/2016 1:06:00 PM

Need to remember so charming.

Bl Devnath
Date: 5/20/2016 2:28:00 PM

Thanks my lovely friend for your comment. Loved always, bl