Forged from the elements

The grossest element earth
shapes mind body form,
which remains inert until,
magnetism conjures a storm.

The air we breathe,
a gift from God,
causes nodes to stir,
leaving childlike heart awed.

Fire heats, water cools,
generating a toroidal force,
which once divine aligned,
connects soul to source.

God is the magician,
who entwines elements four,
that joyful heart begs
love for an encore.
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Empress Avatar
February 22, 2024 at 4:30 AM
God is the magician so true, and the creations we appreciate deeply, i love the depth of this dear seeker. Especially “ which once divine aligned, connects soul to source” soul to source, that will stay in my mind for a long time. Pleasure reading your word weaving. Fave this is! Congratulations on your win
Andresen Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 11:07 AM
The four elements were my choice too ... I like your contribution, U.S. ... well written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:37 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise
Goldsmith Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:47 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write with a great ending... Have a blessed day.............
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 9:19 AM
Thank you dear Paula
Farookh Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:01 AM
Congrats, US. Beautiful, mesmerising poetry. Some great thoughts there.
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 8:40 AM
:)
May Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 4:43 AM
Very nicely penned Seeker, Congrats on your win
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 5:06 AM
Thank you! :)
Guptar Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 11:50 PM
A skillful write on the four elements , Guru. Hearty congratulations on your placement. From a water element.
Seeker Avatar
February 21, 2024 at 12:06 AM
Sun sign water?
Dietrich Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 9:26 PM
Very creative work. Love how you pulled it all together at the end. Congrats
Seeker Avatar
February 20, 2024 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, Andrea dear
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