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Forged from the elements

The grossest element earth shapes mind body form, which remains inert until, magnetism conjures a storm. The air we breathe, a gift from God, causes nodes to stir, leaving childlike heart awed. Fire heats, water cools, generating a toroidal force, which once divine aligned, connects soul to source. God is the magician, who entwines elements four, that joyful heart begs love for an encore.

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Date: 2/22/2024 4:30:00 AM
God is the magician so true, and the creations we appreciate deeply, i love the depth of this dear seeker. Especially “ which once divine aligned, connects soul to source” soul to source, that will stay in my mind for a long time. Pleasure reading your word weaving. Fave this is! Congratulations on your win
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Date: 2/21/2024 11:07:00 AM
The four elements were my choice too ... I like your contribution, U.S. ... well written :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest :) - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:37:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise
Date: 2/21/2024 8:47:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. I enjoyed reading your creative write with a great ending... Have a blessed day.............
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Date: 2/21/2024 9:19:00 AM
Thank you dear Paula
Date: 2/21/2024 8:01:00 AM
Congrats, US. Beautiful, mesmerising poetry. Some great thoughts there.
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Date: 2/21/2024 8:40:00 AM
:)
Date: 2/21/2024 4:43:00 AM
Very nicely penned Seeker, Congrats on your win
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Date: 2/21/2024 5:06:00 AM
Thank you! :)
Date: 2/20/2024 11:50:00 PM
A skillful write on the four elements , Guru. Hearty congratulations on your placement. From a water element.
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Date: 2/21/2024 12:06:00 AM
Sun sign water?
Date: 2/20/2024 9:26:00 PM
Very creative work. Love how you pulled it all together at the end. Congrats
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Date: 2/20/2024 9:28:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea dear

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