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Forged By Fire

We sat at the end of the bed, Together we held hands, and our breath too. We waited, for the news to repeat. There was nowhere to go. Just, a blank screen. Sponsor Edward Ibeh Contest Name Pick A Tile, Vol 5 - Verse | Enter Contest Deadline 6/24/2019 12:00:00 AM Forged by Fire

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Kurt Ravidas

Date: 6/23/2019 7:18:00 AM

A drama behind the scenes as it is. J'aime, j'aime, j'aime :3

Ann Foster
Date: 6/23/2019 9:27:00 AM

How many remember when the TV went off at night. They had the color image, and played the anthem? It came back on in the morning. Thank you ... Ann

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/12/2019 12:56:00 AM

Ann, you have left us hanging, wondering, and wanting more. Poetry at her best!

Ann Foster
Date: 6/12/2019 9:52:00 AM

Your words mean a lot. More than "words" can say. Thank you, my friend. Ann

Caycay Jennings

Date: 6/12/2019 12:03:00 AM

Ew ... you effectively gave me the creeps and need to seek reassurance - well done! All the best ... CayCay

Ann Foster
Date: 6/12/2019 9:49:00 AM

That was the very nicest compliment. TY TY TY...

Hilo Poet

Date: 6/10/2019 8:05:00 AM

Terse verse with a powerful message of what the end result will be when realized, GREAT write Ann, Best Wishes indeed! Aloha William

Ann Foster
Date: 6/10/2019 11:17:00 AM

Ty my friend. I so appreciate your wonderful words. God Bless your day!

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 6/10/2019 7:38:00 AM

Hah! SO much ins SO few words. My favourite kind of write. Excellent. The whole story, and it's end. A winner for me. Good luck in the contest Ann! xomo

Ann Foster
Date: 6/10/2019 11:15:00 AM

You are too kind. But, ty so much. I am glad you enjoyed it.