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Forever War

He took me to the altar His metals all alight We made ourselves a home Our future looked so bright There was that time Brass bugles they did roar The music He did follow Into forever war He got onto a green bus To where there was a fight He wrote me that he’d be okay That everything’s alright Chorus When his country came a calling He didn’t ask what for His job was just to fight in This forever war. I felt a heartbeat singing Unexpectedly New life inside me growing To love and comfort me I stayed away from tv The news was always grim Our baby kept on growing While I waited for him To come home Please come home To come home Please come home One day they came a knockin With medals shiny bright Come all the way to tell me Things won’t be alright They’ll never be alright Chorus When his country came a calling He didn’t ask what for His job was just to fight in This forever war Verse 3 Timmy now is older Than the fight that took my love He wants to be like daddy Still watching from above I wonder when they’ll come a knockin ( will they come a knockin) With medals shiny bright Come all the way to tell me Things won’t be alright They’ll never be alright Chorus When his country came a calling He didn’t ask what for His job was just to fight in This forever war

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Date: 11/18/2023 6:32:00 PM
Such a sad bur beautiful poem full of majesty and might, so when will we step out of the darkness and into God's beautiful Light.
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Date: 11/13/2023 10:36:00 AM
I was watching “The Pacific” by Steven Spielberg and Tom Hanks, when I read your poem. I’m sorry for your loss. You told a story of war, and it’s true, it seems there is always a war going on. Praying for peace and life.
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Date: 10/11/2023 2:52:00 PM
I have to admire those who fight for their country - incredibly brave men and women, I guess some follow in their father's footsteps if they were brought up in a military environment, others make the choice of career for themselves knowing the risks involved. hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/12/2023 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.

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