Forever War

He took me to the altar
His metals all alight
We made ourselves a home
Our future looked so bright

There was that time
Brass bugles they did roar
The music He did follow
Into forever war

He got onto a green bus
To where there was a fight
He wrote me that he’d be okay
That everything’s alright

    Chorus
When his country came a calling
He didn’t ask what for
His job was just to fight in
This forever war.



I felt a heartbeat singing
Unexpectedly 
New life inside me growing
To love and comfort me

I stayed away from tv
The news was always grim
Our baby kept on growing
While I waited for him


To come home
Please come home

To come home
Please come home

One day they came a knockin
With medals shiny bright
Come all the way to tell me
Things won’t be alright
They’ll never be alright

                Chorus  
When his country came a calling
He didn’t ask what for
His job was just to fight in
This forever war

Verse 3
Timmy now is older
Than the fight that took my love
He wants to be like daddy
Still watching from above

I wonder when they’ll come a knockin ( will they come a knockin)
With medals shiny  bright
Come all the way to tell me
Things won’t be alright
They’ll never be alright
        
Chorus 
When his country came a calling
He didn’t ask what for
His job was just to fight in
This forever war
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Date: 11/18/2023 6:32:00 PM
Such a sad bur beautiful poem full of majesty and might, so when will we step out of the darkness and into God's beautiful Light.
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Date: 11/13/2023 10:36:00 AM
I was watching “The Pacific” by Steven Spielberg and Tom Hanks, when I read your poem. I’m sorry for your loss. You told a story of war, and it’s true, it seems there is always a war going on. Praying for peace and life.
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Date: 10/11/2023 2:52:00 PM
I have to admire those who fight for their country - incredibly brave men and women, I guess some follow in their father's footsteps if they were brought up in a military environment, others make the choice of career for themselves knowing the risks involved. hugs Jan x
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Date: 10/12/2023 5:42:00 PM
Thank you, Jan.
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