Joanmarie Peranteau Poet Romanticism

Forever Sure

Forever more...
is how I answered her

She asked me how long
I would love her for
forever more
no less no more
I swore

No high wall or strong door
I'm sure
and my word I gave
she my love
and my soul her slave
Forever sure

Written by my son 2012

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Jack Ellison December 29, 2012 at 6:29 AM Your son is a very talented and creative poet my dear friend! Awesome! Best wishes for 2013! Joanmarie Peranteau December 29, 2012 at 8:52 AM Thank you, I agree, that is why I had to post it. He read the comments also and he thanks you and appreciates your comment and appreciation.

Vicky Tsiluma December 29, 2012 at 1:46 AM Whoa! It is a beautiful poem! The idea of forever and nothing else - now that is an all encompassing love described. Well done for him! Joanmarie Peranteau December 29, 2012 at 8:58 AM On behalf of my son & myself we say thank you for your comment and we are so glad that the poem conveyed the feeling he was trying to express and that you were able to tap into it. Thank you JoanMarie & Gary.

Faleeha Hassan December 28, 2012 at 6:06 PM It's a nice sentiment Written on the form of poetic images Thank you, dear and your son Joanmarie Peranteau December 29, 2012 at 9:02 AM Oh my dear friend, on behalf of my son & myself we thank you for your comment, well said. We are so glad that you got the sense of his poem. Thank you, JoanMarie & my son Gary.

Poet Destroyer A December 28, 2012 at 4:25 PM thanks for sharing awesome poem xoxo pd Joanmarie Peranteau December 29, 2012 at 9:07 AM Your very welcome. We are both appreciative that you took the time to read and comment on it. Thank you JoanMarie and My Son.

Anne-Lise Andresen December 28, 2012 at 11:19 AM A great talent for the future, very well written! Wishing you and your family a happy new year 2013! oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Joanmarie Peranteau December 29, 2012 at 9:13 AM We thankyou...I think so too... JoanMarie and My Son