Forever More Then...2-19-10

if you stop my heart from beating, 
will you breath me back to life, 
kiss the tears from my cheeks, 
one day call me your wife, 
if you steal my breath from my chest, 
and i fall into eternal sleep, 
promise me that youll kiss me, 
and that our love will always breath, 
burn it with the fire, 
so that it never ends, 
and even when my lifes breath is gone, 
we'll be more then friends
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Bordner Avatar
October 7, 2012 at 12:05 AM
I promise - J.A.B. %
A  Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 4:08 PM
VERY INTRESTING POEM ...YOU ALMOST SOUND LIKE A FAIRY TALE . SNOW WHITE ..I LOVE THE KISS PART..ETERNAL SLEEP...IRMA
Sings Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:48 AM
Nice I loveeeee it. So cute.
Torbenson Avatar
February 19, 2010 at 10:46 AM
wow this is a really good poem it hit me hard i can stop reading it very good writtin very good keep it up
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