Forever Making

forever  making 


a moment will pass our eyes like the brightest shining glass 
or little night stars 

tranquil skies above your beautiful eyes 

luminous shores of pinks forever more silken butterflies 
dancing lady of loves cure forever more 

her fantastic poses flowers in the loving passion of the dancing lady 
my ceizar 


walking shadows of love in the golden pink rio de janeiro shores 

undergrowth's covering our such delicate body's of passionate love a morning glory 

shivering hands as i touch thee such delicate face of love for me 

a making of forever true love here your harp of love playing our forever 
cure 

my angel of my life te amo my ceizar

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 7/20/2011 7:25:00 PM
I enjoyed these lovely emotional expressions, Duncan
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Date: 7/20/2011 3:21:00 PM
Dear Duncan, I hope your angel knows how lucky she is to have a man like you. This is simply beautiful! Great use of imagery and powerful emotion as well. Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/23/2011 10:30:00 PM
hi my dear friend carolyn , i hope your keep well ,im back in england again work lol ,but back with my ceizar in december for christmas and the new year going to be fun this year with the new years party in rio de janeiro lol ,thank you as always for your wonderful words to us ,keep safe and well love always duncan ,ceizar xxx
Date: 7/19/2011 10:49:00 PM
Duncan, a wonderful poem,,, and the ending added much spice to the love,,, thanks for sharing,..p.d.
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