Forever Free

Well boy, you’ve 
Finally
Done it now.
You took the rules
And stole away
Into that forever free will.
I’d like to call it 
Disobedience,
But you’d just say it was
Certain. 
Then maybe I could secretly believe
In your solid smile.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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December 29, 2009 at 12:02 PM
I thank you for writing and sharing your poetry with us here at PoetrySoup Larry. I offer you warm greeting for the New Year with best wishes to you on your writing endeavors in 2010 whatever they may be. Love, Carol
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