Connie Gildersleeve Poet Haiku

Forever and More

eternal embrace
euphoria in two hearts
living a life felt

aura of our love
vibrates a high frequency
an ethereal dance

our love grows stronger
still within our golden years
forever and more



For Catie Lindsey's contest, 'In the Mood'

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Skat A May 26, 2015 at 4:54 PM truly a treat to read

Donna Jones May 20, 2013 at 4:30 PM I love the within our golden years...beautiful...congratulations Connie Gildersleeve May 21, 2013 at 4:06 PM Donna thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Charlotte Puddifoot May 20, 2013 at 3:37 PM a lovely trilogy here, congrats on your win :) Connie Gildersleeve May 21, 2013 at 4:07 PM Thank you Charlotte for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich May 20, 2013 at 2:39 PM connie, keep up with your magic pen and practicing haiku. Congrats to you on your win. Connie Gildersleeve May 21, 2013 at 4:09 PM Thank you Andrea for the congrats and lovely comment. Taking an on-line Haiku class. Warm Smiles, Connie

Bl Devnath May 20, 2013 at 11:40 AM It's very nice piece, enjoyed a lot. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl Connie Gildersleeve May 21, 2013 at 4:10 PM Thank you For your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Abdulhafeez Oyewole May 20, 2013 at 11:09 AM Lovely! Congrats on your fine win in the contest. AO Connie Gildersleeve May 21, 2013 at 4:11 PM Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Donna Jones April 30, 2013 at 10:00 PM Love it Connie..:-) Connie Gildersleeve May 2, 2013 at 5:03 PM Thank you Donna for your lovely comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie

Russell Sivey April 30, 2013 at 8:01 PM This is such an incredible and masterful write my friend! I enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here Connie! What an outstanding piece for the contest, Great Work!! Connie Gildersleeve May 2, 2013 at 5:04 PM Thank you Russell for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Carrie Richards April 30, 2013 at 6:59 PM What everyone wants...a love to last through the years.....and still the spark, a flame that never dies. :) Connie Gildersleeve May 2, 2013 at 5:08 PM My husband and I am lucky. High school sweethearts and we still keep ticking after 47 years. Thanks Carrie for your delightful comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie

Andrea Dietrich April 30, 2013 at 3:29 PM Lovely about love!! My favorite was the middle one. Connie Gildersleeve May 2, 2013 at 5:10 PM Andrea thanks for your comment. I beginning to enjoy writing Haikus. Warm Smiles, Connie

Anne-Lise Andresen April 30, 2013 at 10:13 AM - Lovely haiku! - Thank you my friend Connie. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :) Connie Gildersleeve April 30, 2013 at 12:25 PM Thank you Anne for stopping my and leaving a lovely comment on my poem. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie