Forever and More

eternal embrace
euphoria in two hearts
living a life felt

aura of our love
vibrates a high frequency
an ethereal dance

our love grows stronger
still within our golden years
forever and more



For Catie Lindsey's contest, 'In the Mood'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 5/26/2015 4:54:00 PM
truly a treat to read
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Date: 5/20/2013 4:30:00 PM
I love the within our golden years...beautiful...congratulations
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 4:06:00 PM
Donna thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/20/2013 3:37:00 PM
a lovely trilogy here, congrats on your win :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 4:07:00 PM
Thank you Charlotte for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/20/2013 2:39:00 PM
connie, keep up with your magic pen and practicing haiku. Congrats to you on your win.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 4:09:00 PM
Thank you Andrea for the congrats and lovely comment. Taking an on-line Haiku class. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/20/2013 11:40:00 AM
It's very nice piece, enjoyed a lot. Congrats on your win. Loved always, bl
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 4:10:00 PM
Thank you For your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 5/20/2013 11:09:00 AM
Lovely! Congrats on your fine win in the contest. AO
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/21/2013 4:11:00 PM
Thank you for your congratulatory comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 10:00:00 PM
Love it Connie..:-)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:03:00 PM
Thank you Donna for your lovely comment. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 8:01:00 PM
This is such an incredible and masterful write my friend! I enjoyed reading this enlightening poem here Connie! What an outstanding piece for the contest, Great Work!!
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:04:00 PM
Thank you Russell for your comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 6:59:00 PM
What everyone wants...a love to last through the years.....and still the spark, a flame that never dies. :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:08:00 PM
My husband and I am lucky. High school sweethearts and we still keep ticking after 47 years. Thanks Carrie for your delightful comment. Much appreciated. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 3:29:00 PM
Lovely about love!! My favorite was the middle one.
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 5/2/2013 5:10:00 PM
Andrea thanks for your comment. I beginning to enjoy writing Haikus. Warm Smiles, Connie
Date: 4/30/2013 10:13:00 AM
- Lovely haiku! - Thank you my friend Connie. - Luck in contest! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Connie Gildersleeve
Date: 4/30/2013 12:25:00 PM
Thank you Anne for stopping my and leaving a lovely comment on my poem. It means a lot. Warm Smiles, Connie
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