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FOREVER……. You stepped into my life and turned a gray page over You rewrote my destiny and changed its course forever You chiseled my emptiness and carved a tower of dreams For the parched "Bedouin" in me you were an oasis of streams The wave of your presence swept away my melancholy Our hearts crooned on moonlit sands, a soulful rhapsody When you took my hand and said “Come be a part of me” My heart renounced my being and embraced captivity Wrapped in a timeless trance, immersed in love so true The rhythm of My heart beat now resonates within You END

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Date: 2/9/2014 9:13:00 PM
Aruna, , A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 1/28/2014 6:10:00 PM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Aruna- I choose your first nice written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:44:00 PM
This is very nice; I liked it.
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Date: 1/28/2014 3:31:00 PM
ARUNA, FOREVER SOUNDS SWEET, AFTER READING THIS POEM. Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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