Forever

Romance eliminates division. 
A gifted partner to listen.
Love seemingly present in full.
Confused from the tempest’s pull.
Rule of Thumb: Never look a fool.

Eternal soul mates today.
Yet a mere three year stay.
Vows unfulfilled. 
Contract distilled.
Ethereal Mountain to Hellish Hill.

Cherished independence, but a heart’s demand.
Desire for dependence, and now an overdue reprimand.
And then an unfortunate self-loathing; exile in dismay.
Where’s the hopeful light, a romantic incentive to pray?
Needs so long ignored; in shame, no prayer to say.

Is it a natural instinct to seek a companion?
Or is it a defense mechanism, a social compassion?
Ultimately, results of a detrimental fashion.
A prized domestication sunk to the world of nether.
Left without a soul sincere to believe in forever.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008



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Date: 10/4/2008 7:48:00 AM
Congratulations of being featured this week. This is a very wonderful poem. I can see beautiful images of what love should be if everyone acts the way love ordains them to act. Great job! ~Joseph
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Date: 10/4/2008 6:04:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/2/2008 10:13:00 AM
Great write Jordan. I loved the way you played with words. Humorous and very meaningful at the same time. Loved it.....and congratulations!
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Date: 10/2/2008 9:36:00 AM
This is certainly a comment on the current state of relationships!! Fast foods, fast cars, news changing daily, throw away this, throw away that ... yeah its all part of the "Forever" of today ... LOL ... Great write here, Jordan. Can you tell I enjoyed it ... smile ... and congratulations on your writing being featured this week!
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Date: 9/24/2008 7:40:00 AM
Congratulations Jordan on "Forever" being featured this week on Poetry Soup. Vince
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Date: 9/22/2008 6:20:00 AM
Congratulations Jordan on your wonderful poetry being featured this week. Love, Shar
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