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Forest of the Ancient Oak

Nightly, I wander in shadows of a recurring dream 
and find myself wading through a shallow stream.
The Ancient of Oaks calls from beyond the thickets,
its gentle whispers mingling with chirping crickets.

I cannot guide my steps in the direction of choice,
for if I disobey, his leaves rustle in grumbling voice,
"Enter the forest, child, without fear of what I ask. 
Moon and I will guide you with each virtuous task."

In the forest of my dreams, my path alters each night.
Sometimes I run to follow a nightingale in lofty flight.
There are times when I must free myself from a maze,
or suckle from mother fox, a kit waiting for her praise.

One starless night, I stumbled on a gnarled tree root 
whose existence moments before, I dare not dispute,
for the Ancient One is very aware of every step I take.
Forest fauna watch over me 'til first light of daybreak.

I am puzzled why a forest sylph, I was chosen to be.
Ancient One said I would understand all the mystery
when after the last of my journeys comes to an end,
and I'd comprehend that my dreams were a Godsend.

So I do not question when his branches point me East
to right a wrong committed, turning famine into feast.
Or travel North and South, tending a nation that bleeds,
with a message to forests to provide for hunger's needs.

Each morning I awake with the memory of my dream,
my feet wet from wading through a shallow stream.
Some day soon, I hope to learn the reason for my quest.
Tonight I'll be in the forest when the sun sets in the West.



April 17, 2021
In the Forest of My Dreams Contest
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Koplin Avatar
April 22, 2021 at 4:48 PM
Wonderful imagery and excellent rhyme! Awesome
Kauffman Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 8:38 AM
Beautiful metaphoric penning Jenna, - the quest. Your poem is as delicate as a dream floating through memory. Congratulations on your win.
Logan Avatar
April 21, 2021 at 4:06 PM
Thank you very much, Sam.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 3:44 AM
back to congratulate you, sweet friend. God bless you always. Love, Gina
Logan Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Thanks, Gina.
Allison Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:32 PM
dropping back with many congrats Jenna:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 3:46 AM
Thanks for revisiting.
Rose  Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 2:50 PM
You took me on such a mystical ride here, couldn't take my eyes off the poem, congrats on your 2nd place win, and thanks for joining Jenna :)
Logan Avatar
April 20, 2021 at 3:45 AM
Thank you for honoring this write, Mystic.
Buhagiar Avatar
April 18, 2021 at 3:56 AM
Incredibly beautiful poem, Jenna. I read twice even with sound on as my computer permits me. A fave for me. Oh how I love such fantasy poems.
Logan Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:12 AM
You're always so kind with your thoughts, Thanks, Victor.
Laurie Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:15 PM
G'day Jenna ... this is a wonderful tale explained well in meter and rhyme. Loved reading this poem - thanks Jenna - Lindsay
Logan Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:12 AM
Thanks so sincerely, Lindsay.
Mcintosh Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 6:36 PM
Absolutely breathtaking, Jenna. I love it. God bless you with a win, dear friend. Love, Gina
Logan Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:11 AM
Thanks so much, Gina.
Allison Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 12:58 PM
you are a wonderful story teller and such a gifted writer jenna, good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
Logan Avatar
April 19, 2021 at 4:11 AM
I appreciate your kind remarks, Jan. Thank you.
Cunningham Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:14 AM
This is brilliant Jenna, if id read this somewhere else with no poets name against it I would have said it was written by Edgar Allen Poe. Quite dark and sombre. Tom
Logan Avatar
April 17, 2021 at 11:30 AM
The pinnacle of a compliment for such a comparison. Thank you, Tom. It is somewhat envisioned in depths of darkness, but a heroine shall this child become...of some sort.
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