Forest Fountain

Walking through the fragrant overgrown mountain trails on the lush Greek isle of Ikaria, Hot sun fades to shadowy dusk, turning craggy forest kings into silhouette art forms. On this moonlit eve, we discover a Roman fountain flowing with golden forsythia.
Poetry Contest submission: Three Line Poetry Sponsor: Debbie Guzzi
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Hamilton Avatar
March 25, 2015 at 7:30 PM
great imagery Kimberly gl in contest hugs 7
Shaw Avatar
March 26, 2015 at 9:22 AM
Good morning! Thank you for the kind compliment and the seven, Shadow. Have a lovely day! Hugs, Kimberly
Marcum Wong Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:53 PM
Your ending conjures the most beautiful scene Kimberly. This is a wonderful entry for the contest. I hope it does well. 7
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 5:37 PM
Hi Connie! Thank you for your very kind remarks and the seven! I truly appreciate your support. Hugs, Kimberly
A   Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:42 PM
Nice win Kimberly....Linda
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 5:35 PM
Hi Linda! Thank you so much for stopping by with congrats! Sorry for this late reply, I was away. Hugs, Kimberly
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March 18, 2015 at 11:11 PM
A beautiful image like a walk through paradise! Congrats! Hugs, Rhonda
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 5:33 PM
Hi Rhonda, thank you so much for the nice comments and congrats! Sorry for the late reply, I was away. Hugs, Kimberly
A  Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 11:07 PM
KIMBERLY, CONGRATULATIONS, on your 3-line win :) ~SKAT~
Shaw Avatar
March 20, 2015 at 5:31 PM
Hi SKAT! Sorry for this late thank you. I was out of town. Thank you very much for stopping by with congratulations! Hugs, Kimberly
Dietrich Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 1:53 PM
a lovely picture, Kimberly. Congrats on your fine win.
Shaw Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 7:54 PM
Hi Andrea! Thank you for the kind congrats! I appreciate you stopping in. Hugs, Kimberly
Callus Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 10:49 AM
Most lovely and descriptive imagery, Kimberly; very enjoyable. Congrats on a merited win. // paul
Shaw Avatar
March 18, 2015 at 12:30 PM
Hi Paul! I am so happy that you found my poem to be an enjoyable read. I truly appreciate your thoughtful comments, and thank you for the congrats! Hugs, Kimberly
Guzzi Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:13 PM
Go on now write a longer Prose poem ;) Congratulations on your win. Light & Love
Shaw Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:27 PM
Hi Debbie! Thank you so much for recognizing my verse. I was attempting to follow your instructions to a tee, lol. Was it too long? Hugs, Kimberly xx
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:56 PM
i love the 2nd line best Kimberly.. :) congrats on your beautiful poem aND WIN :)//OLIVE ELOISA
Shaw Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:33 PM
Hi Olive! Thank you so much for your lovely comments and the kind congratulations! Very appreciated. Hugs, Kimberly
Haight Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:51 PM
Such lovely imagery created with your words, Kimberly. Congratulations to your on your nice win! Hugs, Sandra
Shaw Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 8:30 PM
Thank you for the very kind comment and the congratulations, Sandra! Hugs, Kimberly xx
Allison Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 5:58 PM
wonderful imagery congrats on your win:-) hugs jan xx
Shaw Avatar
March 17, 2015 at 7:31 PM
Hi Jan! Thank you for stopping in with congrats. You are so sweet and supportive. I really appreciate you :) Hugs, Kimberly xx
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March 16, 2015 at 7:16 AM
Beautiful...good luck Kim! :)
Shaw Avatar
March 16, 2015 at 7:40 AM
Good morning, Kim! Thank you for the good luck wishes. Have a lovely day! Hugs, Kimberly xx
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March 15, 2015 at 4:45 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Way to go..Thanks for stopping b y..Sara
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 5:19 PM
Hi Sara! Thank you for the kind remarks and stopping in to read my poem! Hugs, Kimberly
A  Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:45 PM
oOo,,, I love your entry.... SKAT
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 3:52 PM
Awww, thanks for the enthusiasm, SKAT! I am so glad that you like it :) Hugs, Kimberly xx
Relish Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:33 PM
Beautiful imagery...
Shaw Avatar
March 15, 2015 at 1:38 PM
Thank you for stopping in to read my poem! I truly appreciate the compliment. Hugs, Kimberly
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