Nette Onclaud Poet Verse

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Forest

Firs, oaks surround a path
Flamboyant in hued tints,
Forest of all dreamers
Flinging its lush canvas.
Fabric of buds explodes
Flushed with nature's splendor;
Flaming woods...evergreen!


Pleadies -F Contest for Kim Merryman
9/25/2016

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Andrea Dietrich September 28, 2016 at 11:29 PM So beautiful. I don't know your rating with the judge. but it's a very worthy win!!

Maurice Yvonne September 27, 2016 at 3:43 PM This F contest is very restrictive. Difficult and challenging. You did an excellent job with a tough task. Good luck with the contest. Lots of Love, armand.

Anne-Lise Andresen September 27, 2016 at 3:12 AM - Nette, many congratulations on your great wins poems - I do not participate often in contest, but this I like very much - A challenge like a puzzle .... not easy ... but Pleiades poems is a wonderful form - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison September 26, 2016 at 5:23 PM Fabulous Nette! Many congrats:-) hugs jan xx

Kim Merryman September 26, 2016 at 5:00 PM Beautiful and creative imagery, Nette! Congrats on your 3rd place win! Love, Kim

Agnes Krampe September 26, 2016 at 4:41 PM Back with congrats on your placement, Nette.

Demetrios Trifiatis September 26, 2016 at 5:25 AM Fantastic! Good luck dear nette!

James Marshall Goff September 25, 2016 at 8:01 PM Hi Nette....beautiful poem....deciduous forests like your photo begin in my State below the headwaters of the Mississipi, then south into Iowa, above the Headwaters, boreal forests prevale, my favorite places, jimbo

Pashang Salehi September 25, 2016 at 4:43 PM Beautifully done... Good luck

Paul Callus September 25, 2016 at 3:39 PM You use your paint brushes with capable strokes, Nette! I can imagine the beauty of your forest on canvas! Full marks to you! Hugs // paul

Beautiful Scars September 25, 2016 at 1:00 PM Lovely imagery sweet Nette and I've always loved the color evergreen. ..good luck lovely lady :)-luloo

David Mohn September 25, 2016 at 11:02 AM fabulous :)

CayCay Godwin September 25, 2016 at 10:45 AM I love what you did with your F word and six syllables - very nice, Nette ... CayCay

Daniel Turner September 25, 2016 at 8:15 AM I can smell the tree sap and hear the crunching twigs and leaves, Nette. Great write!

Janice Canerdy September 25, 2016 at 7:55 AM A 7 for this excellent piece, Nette! Janice

Gabby Sabre September 25, 2016 at 7:05 AM A verse that excels. I like all your lines as this is my dream forest. You have a natural flow in your gift of words!

Agnes Krampe September 25, 2016 at 5:33 AM Beautiful pleiades, Nette. I am a hiker and love the woods. Good luck in the contest. Agnes

Anne-Lise Andresen September 25, 2016 at 2:57 AM - The nature is beautiful, take time to enjoy it - Lovely poem, Nette - Good luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Carly Lalion September 24, 2016 at 11:56 PM I like to hike and stop to wonder at the many pleasures of a forest. This impeccable poem captures the splendor of nature's creation in your extraordinary metaphors!

James Peranteau September 24, 2016 at 11:25 PM I felt as if I was strolling through my favorite Forest dear poet friend of mine!, Save....I somehow missed those beautiful F F F ferns...*sm Great write Nette...missed ya....much love, james