Forest

It was late at night,
without any moonlight.
I had a poor eyesight
in the deep darkness
that blended with silence
that befit the forest goddess.

(Dry leaves began to break-
I stood still)

Our ancestors believed that a faceless
man wandered around the forest,
looking for a mischievious god
who stole his face.
The man was loved by the forest goddess.
He was banished from his land,
without any reason or word
from the council of elders.
Every villager was afraid
of the cosmic builders,
who had immortality as their essence.

(Dry leaves continued to break-
I began to tremble with fright)

My parents had warned me not to wander
into the forest, without a scout
or guide. I deeply regretted my choice
to get into the forest.

(A whisper repelled my courage!)

"What are you doing here,
descendant of the forest goddess?!"
I heard from behind.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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October 13, 2015 at 2:58 PM
Teddy, Congratulations on your own favorite Halloween Poem. Take Care **SKAT**
Kimathi Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 11:54 PM
Hi Skat! Thank you so much for enjoying and congratulating my work! Have a lovely day! *^_^* <3 <3
A. Sharma Avatar
October 13, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Congrats on ur awesome winning write Teddy!
Kimathi Avatar
October 15, 2015 at 11:45 PM
Thanks so much for enjoying and applauding my work Dr. Upma! *^_^*
Eastman Avatar
October 9, 2015 at 5:05 PM
Thank You for entering my contest with your Halloween poem. Loved the suspense.
Kimathi Avatar
October 10, 2015 at 1:09 AM
Hi Carol. Thank you for enjoying and applauding my work! It was a great contest! *^_^*
Nyaga Avatar
October 5, 2015 at 2:58 AM
Teddy this is a thrilling piece you have pen.. had hair standing on the back of my head..
Kimathi Avatar
October 6, 2015 at 12:40 AM
Hahahaha....... Thanks bro! ;-)
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