Force Determination

Don't be afraid
On road of life
Don't surrender.

No matter what
The weather is
Bring your sunshine.

Some road can be
Traveled alone
Strolled bravely.

How far dream is
Only one leap
To go along.
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De Beaulieu Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 11:15 AM
Hello Hugo, Yes some roads can be travel alone. I will be brave on the road of life. i want to see where it leads me. Much love here. /Darlene/
De Beaulieu Avatar
March 14, 2025 at 12:33 PM
Hello Hugo, yews we come into this world alone. yes we travel in this world alone. We be come social animals We are happy to meet someone of our own kind. or meet our soulmates and destiny. I am happy to hear this. I have found a lot of wisdom with you. I do feel an unique happiness Hugo. Love you here. /Darlene/
Sarvida Jr. Avatar
March 11, 2025 at 6:56 PM
Actually, in reality we travel in this life alone. We came in this world alone. We just became interactive because we are a social animals. Only then we are happy until we meet someone in our own kind. Or meet our soulmate and destiny. We make our own journey alone or with mate. Lastly, we also depart this world alone. I found a unique happiness in you, Darlene. Love you here./Hugo.
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