Forbidden Love

Forbidden love in the woods captures a sunbeam memory moment…



Rick Parise~Nature Monoku contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Mehta Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 2:49 PM
Beautiful expression nicely penned.Please give once over to the syllable count, should not exceed more than 17., Maggie
Mcafee Avatar
June 2, 2011 at 9:50 PM
Thank you for your kind words..I did make some adjustments. Love, Maggie
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