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Forbidden Love

Forbidden love in the woods captures a sunbeam memory moment… Rick Parise~Nature Monoku contest

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Date: 6/2/2011 2:49:00 PM
Beautiful expression nicely penned.Please give once over to the syllable count, should not exceed more than 17., Maggie
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Maggie Mae Mcafee
Date: 6/2/2011 9:50:00 PM
Thank you for your kind words..I did make some adjustments. Love, Maggie

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