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Once or twice I thought it might be nice To run away and forget my life But the truth is that I can't let go For emotions own the better of me But wouldn't it be lovely To make up a new me.

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Craig Schaber

Date: 8/16/2011 6:09:00 PM

great i like this one

Russell Sivey

Date: 8/10/2011 7:46:00 PM

No, no new me's. Then there would be two of me, and one is plenty! Great write here too! You are doing very well!!

Abbey Haigh
Date: 8/15/2011 6:26:00 PM

I could add that to the end :) Thanks for your comment Russel, much appreciated x

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 8/10/2011 5:45:00 PM

So true, we all wish we can start again... but what we go through is what makes us who we are... just my 2 cents....

Abbey Haigh
Date: 8/15/2011 6:27:00 PM

Isuppose when you look at it that way it makes sense, but sometimes the only option is to get away! If only it were easy to do :) Thanks for your comment x