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Once or twice
I thought it might be nice 
To run away and forget my life
But the truth is that
I can't let go
For emotions own the better of me
But wouldn't it be lovely
To make up a new me.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Schaber Avatar
August 16, 2011 at 6:09 PM
great i like this one
Sivey Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 7:46 PM
No, no new me's. Then there would be two of me, and one is plenty! Great write here too! You are doing very well!!
Haigh Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:26 PM
I could add that to the end :) Thanks for your comment Russel, much appreciated x
Falotico Avatar
August 10, 2011 at 5:45 PM
So true, we all wish we can start again... but what we go through is what makes us who we are... just my 2 cents....
Haigh Avatar
August 15, 2011 at 6:27 PM
Isuppose when you look at it that way it makes sense, but sometimes the only option is to get away! If only it were easy to do :) Thanks for your comment x
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