Forbid Me My Love

<                                 dances around a rings fire
                                   mounts horse returns for ones desire
                                   echo's linger from canyon's ridge
                                   navajo commanche just smidge
                                   forbidden love from chief's higher   








This Was Written by Katherine Stella
Entry For Brian Strand's 5 Line Contest
This Is Written In A Spanish Quintain
GL All
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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May 15, 2011 at 7:56 AM
Lovely piece Katherine ..delightful imagery here ..good luck in the contest my friend.. hope all is well with u and family... luv the ambiance of this one..luv..
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May 15, 2011 at 7:03 AM
Interesting one..Sure to get Brian's attention..Enjoyed reading this morn..Good luck..Sara
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