Notes About The Poem
Poetic Form: Senryu
Inspired: 2024 May 18
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for your ides only 01


       a point 
         to ponder

         the worst
        students
            go to school

    only
               after hours ...
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Buhagiar Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 7:31 AM
Quite a tongue-in-the-cheek poem. Short and to the point. Great reflection.
Kelii Kekaula Avatar
May 19, 2024 at 4:33 PM
The joys of waiting for your friends doing what the church calls 'penitence' school terms as 'detention' for misbehaving in class--Oy ve! Thanks, Victor, Aloha
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