For You

this is my fist poem so be kind!!

if i had you
to go and wake up to
i would hold you very tight
every single night
and even when we fight 
i would still stay to you goodnight
because my feelings are so strong
its you that i for long
hold my and and see
me and you will be free 
i dont know about you
but these words are so true
every time we kiss
i go in total bliss
we have so much fruitfulness
and you are just the cuites
i dont care if i look foolish 
im only speaking my truest
for your love
id do anything you could dream of
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 7, 2016 at 2:23 PM
David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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October 18, 2012 at 5:46 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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October 16, 2012 at 9:28 PM
cool poem ,,,, love the way it rhymes ;} keep writing .
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October 16, 2012 at 8:16 PM
Ah...so beautiful write..so romantic..thank you David for your nice share..welcome to soup ...Enjoyed !!! <3 :) SK
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