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this is my fist poem so be kind!! if i had you to go and wake up to i would hold you very tight every single night and even when we fight i would still stay to you goodnight because my feelings are so strong its you that i for long hold my and and see me and you will be free i dont know about you but these words are so true every time we kiss i go in total bliss we have so much fruitfulness and you are just the cuites i dont care if i look foolish im only speaking my truest for your love id do anything you could dream of

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Date: 2/7/2016 2:23:00 PM
David, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 10/18/2012 5:46:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/16/2012 9:28:00 PM
cool poem ,,,, love the way it rhymes ;} keep writing .
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Date: 10/16/2012 8:16:00 PM
Ah...so beautiful write..so romantic..thank you David for your nice share..welcome to soup ...Enjoyed !!! <3 :) SK
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