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Yes 
Anything 
If you say please

epigram

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Diane Christian

April 16, 2009 at 12:21 PM

please makes all the difference, Well pened god bless from diane

Diane Christian

April 16, 2009 at 12:13 PM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, great work God bless from diane

Raul Moreno

April 15, 2009 at 10:48 AM

Nice epigram James and crongrats on your feature of the week...Raul

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

April 14, 2009 at 12:52 PM

Will you please pay my light bill? Just kidding. lol You're right please does make the asking nicer. Congratulations on having your poem feathred this week.

Rhonda Hero Aka Hero-Wilson

April 14, 2009 at 5:25 AM

Short is good, I think sometimes we get more out them than the long ones...Of course I like all types..great write and Congratulations on being featured...mine is featured as welll..Smiles-Rhonda Kay

April 13, 2009 at 4:32 PM

Sounds like something I would tell my girls when they were little. Enjoyed your poem. Congratulations on having it featured. Keep on writing! Wishing you ongoing success. Karen

Ernilando Tugaff

April 13, 2009 at 12:00 PM

Short but full of meaning. Congratulations on your poem being featured this week. Ernilando

Sharon Winter

April 13, 2009 at 10:33 AM

Short and sweet. Congrats on your featured write! Love, Shar

Carol Sunshine Brown

April 13, 2009 at 6:48 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week. May you have many more featured in the future. Love, Carol

Aleera De La Keur

April 13, 2009 at 6:24 AM

Congrats on being featured this week, well deserved....Aleera

Maryam Jameela Haniff

January 4, 2009 at 1:48 PM

ha ha... great James, please is a magical word...love Maryam

Breana Wiggins

December 13, 2008 at 10:42 PM

You have a way with words...good *Breana*

November 25, 2008 at 5:19 PM

The power of one word. I think most are receptive to being polite. Much said in a few words. Thank you for sharing this one with us. Happy Thanksgiving! Karen

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