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For the Sparrow

Oh, for the sparrow who feathers his journey rallied by sunshine chosen by air Capturing breeze unaware of his being free of intention free of despair Oh, for the sparrow who weathers his beauty in balance with nature for delicate grace Gentle and soothing in care of the heavens to live for the ages for all to embrace

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Date: 12/5/2019 12:43:00 PM
Hello Gentile Mike, i love the sparrows. Such a small bird yet so strong to be here all through the winter. Yes a small bird,yet strong to face the winter months. Have a nice day my friend. xxxx-ooo.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 12/5/2019 1:27:00 PM
Thank you so much Darlene, Yes, they are indeed strong and beautiful xxoo Happy Thursday!
Date: 11/26/2019 5:50:00 PM
Gently phrased as its existence was framed, well done.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/27/2019 7:56:00 AM
Thanks so much Dawne !!
Date: 11/20/2019 9:39:00 AM
Beautifully metered and wistfully expressed, Mike. Good write.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/20/2019 3:33:00 PM
Thanks so much Dale!!
Date: 11/20/2019 12:05:00 AM
An extraordinary write, Mike.. It flows so smootly!! Really enjoyed your rhyme.. Many blessings!!
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/20/2019 6:48:00 AM
Thanks so much Robertina xxoo
Date: 11/18/2019 9:24:00 PM
You have given me a whole new and remarkable perspective on a bird heretofore thought was quite ordinary! Thanks, Mike. Cheers, Gershon
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/20/2019 6:49:00 AM
Thanks GW, appreciated as always!! Happy Wednesday!
Date: 11/12/2019 11:38:00 AM
Oh, for the sparrow who weathers his beauty in balance with nature for delicate grace.. Beautiful.. enjoyed reading.
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/12/2019 11:52:00 AM
Thanks so much, Eve xxoo
Date: 11/12/2019 7:33:00 AM
- Gentle and soothing to look at, Mike ... a lovely poem :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/12/2019 11:14:00 AM
Thanks Anne-Lise xxoo
Date: 11/12/2019 6:47:00 AM
I adore little sparrows and this poem is a perfect little tribute. Nicely done....Maria
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/12/2019 11:15:00 AM
Thanks Maria, so kind of you to say Xxoo
Date: 11/11/2019 3:34:00 PM
This is a great poem, flows like a lovely little river! Janice
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/11/2019 8:24:00 PM
Thanks so much Janice xxoo
Date: 11/10/2019 4:32:00 PM
what a charming tribute to the little sparrow, so lovely to see you back posting Mike, hope all is good with you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/10/2019 7:20:00 PM
Thanks so much Jan xxoo
Date: 11/10/2019 11:58:00 AM
Gorgeous poetry here, Mike! Your rhythm is phrases are pure joy to read! A fave! :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/10/2019 4:23:00 PM
Laura, thanks so much, I am so glad you liked it, I do truly love Sparrows xxoo
Date: 11/9/2019 10:51:00 AM
Nice... I have many sparrows in my garden.. nice to see you back..
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2019 12:46:00 PM
Thanks Silent One !!
Date: 11/9/2019 10:08:00 AM
Nice...You brought Sparrow to life...and how can he Sing...
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2019 10:37:00 AM
Thank you Arturo!
Date: 11/9/2019 8:56:00 AM
I love birds and I love this poem. Very nice Mike :)
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Mike Gentile
Date: 11/9/2019 9:02:00 AM
Thanks so much Heidi!!

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