For the Fisher King On His Golden Jubilee

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O’ friend! Son of this realm your native land
  and Knight of the Long Bay on the long shore -
Fisher King to its isle and rock and sand
  where long ago we drank and gazed The Tor.
And I echo back to that flickered light
  when the fires of youth burned in you and me -
your joust a friendly repulse to my smite
  in our sometime world of headfu-ckery!
Truly we are each to each older bound
  so stoke the fires that blaze up on the Firth -
think on its mortal flame, its living sound
  how one day it shall perish from the Earth.
O Captain! My Captain! I say to you
the mind is still young and the heart is true.


               Written: June 2010

         For CB on his 50th Birthday


Note: The Tor (pictured) is a rocky outcrop
         in the East Coast Bays on the northern 
         beaches of Auckland, New Zealand.

         Captain is a reference from a Walt 
         Whitman line. It was an epithet CB
         would often jokingly refer to me as.

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Date: 2/8/2025 3:25:00 PM
This is a cool poem to a friend. A story of past youthful freedom and happy travels gives a sense nostalgic yearnings. This is deep and heartwarming.
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 2/8/2025 10:17:00 PM
Hi Hilda, it’s nostalgic alright. Thanks for stopping by.
Date: 11/29/2024 7:34:00 AM
Sounds like you have a strong friend Keith. That's nice...especially since our individual time frame passes quickly.
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Date: 11/28/2024 11:46:00 AM
This has a medieval feel to it. I like it!
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/29/2024 4:23:00 AM
Yep, has its roots in an Arthurian legend.
Date: 11/28/2024 6:08:00 AM
Keith that was commendable that you wrote this inspirational piece for for CB for his birthday. I am sure it brought back memories for him. A good friend you are to this friend of yours. Thank you for sharing this special sonnet reflecting Tor and special memories you both shared. Such a lovely area. I was wondering about his reaction when he saw this dedication to his birthday? What a nice gift of this sonnet he received on his 50 the birthday personalized just for him. I am sure he appreciated
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/30/2024 5:21:00 PM
Keith so sorry to hear of the loss of your friend CB. At least you brought him joy to read your poetry of your friendship. My condolences to you Keith...
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Keith D Trestrail
Date: 11/29/2024 4:19:00 AM
Unfortunately CB passed away a few years ago. Cheers MT.
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Michael Tor
Date: 11/28/2024 6:09:00 AM
this effort from you. How special is that? Thank you for sharing and re posting. Have a great day my friend...
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