For the Bride and Groom

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My wife wanted me to write something nice for two weddings of coworkers last Saturday 9 September 2023. The poem below is what I came up with, and I put them in little scrolls attached to wedding cards.

May be a doodle of heart and text that says 'Two hearts so united, should never be divided. May the love you both feel now Ever continuously grow, And this fleeting moment of bliss Evolve into eternal happiness!'

Two hearts so united Should never be divided. May the love you both feel now Ever continuously grow, And this fleeting moment of bliss Evolve into eternal happiness.

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