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2nd in Rondelet Contest (Sponsor: Joseph May)

Judged: May 8th, 2025

For she dances alone

Dancing alone
in a bed of frozen teardrops
Dancing alone
until feet are as raw as bone
until, if only, her heart stops
if only, his breath like soursops...
Dancing alone
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May 9, 2025 at 3:23 PM
A melancholy verse Trina, Very nicely penned, Trina, Congrats on your win
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May 10, 2025 at 4:03 PM
Appreciated as always. Thank you!
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