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For Sean At Henry's Memorial

Big-gun emotions
Grief sounds a hole in the soul
Ears empty echoes

losssympathysenryu

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Carol Sunshine Brown

June 3, 2010 at 8:21 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Tamra. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

June 1, 2010 at 2:52 PM

Congratulations on your Senryu going into the second round of the competiton..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

May 31, 2010 at 1:58 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Michael Jordan

May 28, 2010 at 9:10 PM

Tamara, great senryu -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

May 25, 2010 at 5:48 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tamra. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

May 24, 2010 at 1:32 PM

Many congrats on your wonderfully emotive featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Sara Kendrick

August 15, 2009 at 4:53 PM

Nicely written Haiku. Sara

Sharon Winter

August 12, 2009 at 7:14 AM

Powerful emotion. Incredible writing. Soupmail for you. love, shar xoxo

Anna-Marie Docherty

May 27, 2009 at 7:02 AM

Wonderfully written 5-7-5 Haiku form! Your imagery is powerful and great comparison used too! Thanks for your maost welcome SoupMail of congratulations, humbled. Anna-Marie.