For Sean At Henry's Memorial

Big-gun emotions Grief sounds a hole in the soul Ears empty echoes

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/3/2010 8:21:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round Tamra. I wish you the best in the finals. Love, Carol

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/1/2010 2:52:00 PM

Congratulations on your Senryu going into the second round of the competiton..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara

Date: 5/31/2010 1:58:00 PM

Congratulations on making it through the first round of the Poetry Soup contest with this poem. Best wishes in the finals. Karen

Michael Jordan

Date: 5/28/2010 9:10:00 PM

Tamara, great senryu -Congratulations on having your poetry featured this week, God Bless, mj

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/25/2010 5:48:00 AM

Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Tamra. May you have many more features and may you find loads of inspiration along the way. Love, Carol

Janette Fisher

Date: 5/24/2010 1:32:00 PM

Many congrats on your wonderfully emotive featured piece this week. Rgds Janette

Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/15/2009 4:53:00 PM

Nicely written Haiku. Sara

Sharon Winter

Date: 8/12/2009 7:14:00 AM

Powerful emotion. Incredible writing. Soupmail for you. love, shar xoxo

Anna-Marie Docherty

Date: 5/27/2009 7:02:00 AM

Wonderfully written 5-7-5 Haiku form! Your imagery is powerful and great comparison used too! Thanks for your maost welcome SoupMail of congratulations, humbled. Anna-Marie.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/15/2009 7:13:00 PM

Very nice, Tamra! Love the comparison of the sound of grief as "a hole in the soul." It sure feels that way. Love, Carolyn