For Sara Kendrick

Today is Sunday, September 20, 2009 at 5:31 AM

today
is
mayan tuesday
market
alligator
snap
with
human hair
muzzle

big day
corn harvest
nest bird boss sway
graite
sand
grain
no
no granite here
the ground
fell away
cenote
for
jose
land water corn
his way
codex
burned
2017
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Stanton Avatar
October 13, 2009 at 7:49 PM
thank you Karen-Here is a poem answer to?
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October 13, 2009 at 6:26 PM
The short lines give this poem rhythm. Interesting use of imagery. Nice tribute to Sara. Glad to hear you are excited about writing again. Best wishes. Karen
Culverhouse Avatar
September 24, 2009 at 6:08 AM
nicley penned
Spence Sr Avatar
September 21, 2009 at 4:50 AM
This is wonderful. I really like the pattern and the flow of the poem. Welcome to poetrysoup. Great job! ~Joseph
Stanton Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 10:33 PM
Thank you Sara, Patricia, and Carol. I had thought I had 'retired' from writing, but have recently been re-infected. I thank you for your encouragement and support. Tom
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September 20, 2009 at 6:04 PM
Hi Thomas Welcome to Poetry Soup! I'm sure Sara got a kick out of you thinking of her in this interesting write. Thanks for sharing. Look forward to reading more of your poetry in the future. Take care Love Light Truth Patricia
Kendrick Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 6:17 AM
Interesting write. Is this a prediction for the future? Thanks for the poem. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
September 20, 2009 at 6:07 AM
Welcome to PoetrySoup Thomas. I wish you the best in your writing endeavors. Love, Carol
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