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This Goes out to My Pop,
i've gotta stop,
you wouldn't wanna see me cry,
you would wanna see me fly,
i've let you down ,
Please don't frown.
I've gotta Stop,
Turn my Life Around,
Only then will you be Proud,
But i've Gotta Stop,
All the hurt i hold inside ,
Of all the times i've cried,
Knowing you wanna see me smile,
Makes me wanna Give it a Trial,
You Will always Be A part of me,
What people Don't See,
Is What you mean to me,
Now your free
I begin to realise, 
You were My Life's Favourite Surprise.....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Date: 4/23/2013 10:53:00 PM
a nice poem Tamara"Welcome to the poetry soup. My name is Linda; many poets on the soup call me PD for fun. I'm stopping by to invite you on over to my latest contest --called the “7 wonders” I'm hoping you will consider the enjoyment and challenges we offer in our contest. If you like, please consider my contest. You can find the contest page on the top left hand side. I’m looking forward in reading and enjoying your poems in the future. Today I will start by reading all you have posted this far..... Thanks @-> LINDA <-@"
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Date: 4/22/2013 11:49:00 PM
Beautiful sentiments. Keep on writing. SuZ
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Date: 4/20/2013 7:08:00 AM
Beautiful expression of love and soft regret. I felt every emotion you wrote into this beautiful poem..... Jake
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Date: 4/18/2013 7:18:00 AM
This poem gace me 'goosebumps-- excellent portrayel of regret and love. Well done !!
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Date: 4/19/2013 5:52:00 AM
thankyou so much this is a poem I hold close and dear