For Paul

For Paul


I heard the siren loud and shrill
And down my back there cruised a chill
A gas explosion, down the mine
Had blocked the shaft at number nine.

Twelve miners trapped beneath the ground
But one was dead when they were found
My brother Paul, of sixteen years
My mother’s face awash with tears.

Just like a babe she bathed her son
Her little boy whose life was gone
My chest so tight...my throat so dry
A pain so deep I could not cry

Years pass,but still there are times
 just before sleep
When I remember...and weep.



An original poem on the theme of --- Funeral/ Death
Margaret Foster
Part truth / part fiction. 22/5/10
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Guzzi Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 4:49 PM
An awful story so sorry! Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Yvonne Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 10:38 AM
I am sorry for your loss. Congratulations on winning with this touching very well written piece.
Meier-Hans Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 10:32 AM
This is so sad and heart wrenching. I can see your mother there with her heart breaking, and I feel so sad for her. Congratulations on your win Margaret.
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October 1, 2014 at 10:34 AM
PS, my mothers name is Margaret and my brothers name is Paul.
Phookan Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 6:40 AM
Margaret , I loved this poem a lot. It is not only very earnest, expressed from the heart and a very fine work,, but also very well edited. Many congrats on a wonderful win.. huggs
Foster Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 8:39 AM
Thank you Gautami for these kind words they are much appreciated.
Jordan Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 10:00 PM
Margaret, I'm at a loss for words - I have lived through many tragic deaths and been with those I love as they tragically lost their lives - This poem is heartbreakingly beautiful, Congratulations on placing in the contest, YF4L, God Bless, mj
Sweetheart Avatar
June 1, 2010 at 11:45 AM
Congrats Margaret on your winning poem in the Whats My Theme contest .. enother great win this week.. for an awesome write.. luv.. Linda-Marie.
Mehta Avatar
May 21, 2010 at 8:17 PM
Emotions recollected effectively. Good Luck in the contest
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