For New Poet Kittens






             Don’t you dare rock the boat!
             Get in line, sweet, poet kitten.
             Or find yourself, under our mote,
             With leather gloves. you’ll be smitten!


             Just pretend life is perfect and fun.
             You must pay homage to us, each morn
             Lest we show you the door, and then some.
             These are our stern rules, do not ignore!


             The poet did this for five years straight.
             She ran out of things to pen, beautiful!
             What if she decided to change her fate?
             And write for her God, who is immutable!



                             6/23/2024

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Anonomus Scorpio

July 4, 2024 at 12:40 PM

I love the honorable truth. It is what I found inside the message of this write. Those who's sole purpose, is to write only for others approval I find very difficult. I have only ever written for myself, It's took finding a platform to understand the joy that comes from being seen as myself..... I appreciate you greatly for the way you make me think when I read your work! A.S

Panagiota Romios

July 4, 2024 at 2:08 PM

Hello AS and Happy Fourth. I cant think of a better comment to receive on this holiday. We both celebrate with the Trophy of Freedom and Self Expression,and are fearless to be who we are, Cheers! Keep up the good work. AS, you are a delightful soul and welcomed poet! Mrrci, Pangie

Robert L. Hinshaw

June 22, 2024 at 5:46 PM

What a delightful write, dear Pangie. The foto looks like my dear old cat, Jeff! Bob H

Panagiota Romios

June 22, 2024 at 6:10 PM

Hey how is Jeff in your new digs! If I were a cat, I’d love it. He lives like a king, he does! Those last four lines mean nuch to me, In the 70’s the phrase, Be Happy Now was prevalent. I think Be Happy Meow, wont be as meaningful to younger poets. Oh, well! PS scratch Jeff’neck for me. Pangie xx

Paula Goldsmith

June 22, 2024 at 9:32 AM

What a powerful write.... Have A Blessed Day/Weekend Writing Away.............

Panagiota Romios

June 22, 2024 at 11:06 AM

Thanks , when I first came here, I would warned don’t write about this and don’t worry about that!Well, I have the kind of personality that if you tell me not to do it.,i will do what youtell me not to do. I guess because I am not here to be liked and patted on the head! The ability to write l I think,comes from God!I know not everybody believes that and I don’t care.. I do my best .. The last paragraph was the most powerful. Your friend, Pangie