For My Husband

One
plus one
makes two,  but
two is nothing 
without commitment.
Through glad times and through tears,
we’ve lasted forty-plus years.
On and on we go, for with you
I belong; together we are strong!

March 18, 2018
Dedicated to my husband Joel, who like wine, got better with time.
Entered for Silent One's 'Together we are strong' Poetry Contest
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018


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Date: 3/29/2018 1:31:00 AM
Wow.... What a beautiful tribute! I loved it Andrea... Just beautiful... Congratulations on your well deserved first place ...
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Date: 3/27/2018 4:57:00 PM
Awesome write and value , awesome win, congratulations sweet lady .. Have a nice Easter weekend :) Hugs eve
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Date: 3/25/2018 4:44:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. So much togetherness and so much strength. I am at 38 years, but that is 28 and 10 years. The ten years feel much stronger. You wrote a 'simple' poem, but love is that simple in a way. Many wishes, Kai
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Date: 3/24/2018 11:07:00 PM
Back with congrats, Andrea.
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Date: 3/24/2018 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place win with this awesome tribute. Well done!
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:51:00 AM
Congratulations, Andrea on your great wil with a lovely poem.
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Date: 3/23/2018 12:41:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Andrea. Tom
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Date: 3/22/2018 8:55:00 PM
Yay! Back with congratulations! :)) xomo!
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Date: 3/22/2018 7:30:00 PM
Just lovely...congrats on your first place win Drea! Hugs :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 6:06:00 PM
I'll read this to my wife, hope she'll learn something...
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:54:00 PM
Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:51:00 PM
Hi Andrea, What a good dedication to your husband Joel. Congratulations on your 1st place win . It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:33:00 PM
Very nice Andrea. You and Joel, strong like a rock. Blessings.
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Date: 3/22/2018 3:30:00 PM
What a lovely wife MR Dietrich has, a beautiful nonet tribute.. Congratulation on your first place, we should all be there for one another, so we can all be strong...
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Date: 3/21/2018 2:39:00 PM
Honey, you are not married to Joel, you said "I do" to Joe. Other than that humorous typo, you landed this one quite steady and strong. My write is too late for the contest which is a ridiculous one to miss!!! Ouch. I think I have caught up with your poetry that I so enjoy. Love ... CayCay
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Date: 3/19/2018 6:37:00 PM
Beautiful Andrea! I love reading love stories as you have penned. Commitment is key. I don’t have anything posted right now but am putting a shoutout for Armand. If you get a chance read his latest poem. So nice to see fellow poets get noticed for their brilliant work. :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 4:58:00 PM
How fortunate you both are! This is SO good, Andrea! Soupmail. Janice
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Date: 3/19/2018 4:33:00 PM
What a lovely tribute for your husband and you to celebrate your long married life together Andrea. I hope he enjoys this as much as I did. Congrats on your many years together. xxoo : )
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Date: 3/19/2018 1:01:00 PM
Lovely tribute to your husband Andrea. Tom
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Date: 3/19/2018 9:12:00 AM
- A sweet couple, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/19/2018 7:01:00 AM
How sweet it is! Kudos for the journey together..a lovely tribute..best for a win, Andrea.
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Date: 3/19/2018 6:53:00 AM
Lucky you two! This is a beautiful love poem Andrea.
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Date: 3/19/2018 3:20:00 AM
A great tribute to your husband...
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Date: 3/18/2018 11:08:00 PM
Wonderful! Mile wide smile :) my best to you in the contest, top prize from me xomo!
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Date: 3/18/2018 10:19:00 PM
That is so sweet. Awesome poem, Andrea.
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