For My Boy: Heads and Tails

For you, my vow
For you, my joy,
For you, my worry,
For you, my boy.

For you, my bow
For you, my cry.
From you, my boon
My boon- your joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Bagnall Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 6:16 AM
That's got a real nice flow to it, you've worked with the restriction and used repetition really well, nice piece, enjoyed. Congrats on the win.
Poet Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 2:50 AM
A great poem Sadaf.Congrats on your win.
Brown Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 1:03 PM
Congratulations on your super win today in "Nikko's" contest Sadaf. Love, Carol
K. Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:32 AM
I really found this to be very touching, Sadaf! You really brought your love for your son across here-- super duper congrats on your beautiful and meaningful write :D!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 10:47 AM
Good one like it congratulations x
Poet Avatar
January 15, 2012 at 7:17 AM
Good one.Best wishes.
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