For Michelle Macdonald

For Michele MacDonald

pea green boat
on the pond of whimsy
mikki on board
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Dietrich Avatar
November 23, 2012 at 9:31 PM
seeing this one again. ME LIKES.
Maverick Avatar
November 22, 2012 at 1:17 PM
Hey whats she doing out there on a Pond of whimsy no less..! Hey..! there could be whirlpools by the sounds of it.." Get my partner back..! CAN YOU HEAR ME DAVER..??? OH my I'm a long way from Texas." I know I'll get a Loud-hailer.. Ya'know the power of my brain surprises even me at Times.." (Gee I wonder what battery strength I'll need.??)
Mac Donald Avatar
November 15, 2012 at 1:33 PM
"The owl and the pussycat went to sea"...Ah, I've always and since forever loved nursery rhymes...that's one of my favorites.:) Almost every day I think of something to write, minutes after I'll forget. Daver blow some faerydust this way, please. Love you, Mikki
Mac Donald Avatar
November 14, 2012 at 4:29 PM
Oh, a surprise...I love this, Daver! I'm thinking that in late spring any boat coming behind the house would be "pea green".:)) Weeds are all gone, geese as well, this morning there was a film of ice. Thank you, I'm honoured by your sweet thoughts.:)) I'll have to come up with one for you!:) Love you, Mikki
Wesley Avatar
November 13, 2012 at 4:23 PM
She's waiting for you to do the paddling too! Fun verse for our sweet friend, has she read it yet|?
A   Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 4:22 PM
Lucky Michelle,,, you are so sweet... xox~pd
Dietrich Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 3:28 PM
awwww, so sweet. I LOVES it.
Horne Avatar
November 12, 2012 at 2:16 PM
intriguing images here, Daver - I'm thinking of the Owl and the Pussy Cat in the pea green boat, lol
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November 12, 2012 at 12:33 PM
Sweet..... Have a wonderful week. - - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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