Notes About The Poem

You can try to walk away from love, but you true love will having you running back.

For Evermore

do not walk away 
true love is never ending 
two hearts beat as one 

Senryu Contest Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Mick Talbot 
7/6/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Gentry Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Congratulations on your win! :)
Messina Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Thank you, Susan! :)
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 2:21 PM
Charles, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
Messina Avatar
August 6, 2018 at 5:57 PM
Thank you, Eve! Hugs // Charlie :)
Toney Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 3:26 PM
Congratulations on your win, Charles. Nicely done :)
Messina Avatar
August 5, 2018 at 6:36 AM
Thank you, Mark! :)
Gauthier Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 11:41 PM
Sweet, Charlie. Congrats on your win.
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:45 AM
Thank you, Line :)
Dietrich Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 3:23 PM
Charlie, this is precious! Congrats for your win.
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:46 AM
Aww...Thank you, Andrea :)
Sietesantos Avatar
August 3, 2018 at 12:58 PM
Congratulations on your win, Charlie! I love this wonderfully romantic Senryu! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Messina Avatar
August 4, 2018 at 7:47 AM
Thank you very much, Pandita! Hope you have a wonderful weekend as well, my dear friend! hugs // Charlie
Ashley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:49 AM
Dear Charlie, your last precious line says it all.. 'two hearts beat as one'.. so true that the two cannot be separated once melted together by love and embraced in one rhythm. A poem of impressive beauty my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Messina Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:06 AM
Dear Susan, it is as precious as your lovely comments! They always put a morning smile on my face...Thanks for kind words and your kindness...As always, warm wishes to you dear friend...Charlie
Sands Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:28 AM
This is true, very nice Charles :)
Messina Avatar
July 7, 2018 at 7:39 AM
Thank you, Heidi! have a wonderful weekend!
Man Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:09 PM
I love this, Charles!
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:25 PM
Thank you, Lm I'm not sure this is actually a senryu, this is my first attempt at this form. Much appreciated!
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 10:50 AM
Hello Charles Messina I do believe these words. Because true love is so hard to find. When i find it again I will hold onto it and never let go. have a nice day my friend.
De Beaulieu Avatar
July 8, 2018 at 10:42 AM
Yes that is so true. Have a nice day my friend.
Messina Avatar
July 6, 2018 at 11:34 AM
Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, You are so right it is so hard to find, and when we find it, we must grasp onto it tight. But you never know where or when, sometimes you'll find it when you least expect it. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.
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