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You can try to walk away from love, but you true love will having you running back.

For Evermore

do not walk away 
true love is never ending 
two hearts beat as one 

Senryu Contest Poetry Contest 
Sponsored by Mick Talbot 
7/6/2018

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Susan Gentry

Date: 8/6/2018 5:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your win! :)

Charles Messina
Date: 8/6/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! :)

Eve Roper

Date: 8/5/2018 2:21:00 PM

Charles, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Charles Messina
Date: 8/6/2018 5:57:00 PM

Thank you, Eve! Hugs // Charlie :)

Mark Toney

Date: 8/4/2018 3:26:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Charles. Nicely done :)

Charles Messina
Date: 8/5/2018 6:36:00 AM

Thank you, Mark! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/3/2018 11:41:00 PM

Sweet, Charlie. Congrats on your win.

Charles Messina
Date: 8/4/2018 7:45:00 AM

Thank you, Line :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/3/2018 3:23:00 PM

Charlie, this is precious! Congrats for your win.

Charles Messina
Date: 8/4/2018 7:46:00 AM

Aww...Thank you, Andrea :)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/3/2018 12:58:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Charlie! I love this wonderfully romantic Senryu! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Charles Messina
Date: 8/4/2018 7:47:00 AM

Thank you very much, Pandita! Hope you have a wonderful weekend as well, my dear friend! hugs // Charlie

Susan Ashley

Date: 7/15/2018 9:49:00 AM

Dear Charlie, your last precious line says it all.. 'two hearts beat as one'.. so true that the two cannot be separated once melted together by love and embraced in one rhythm. A poem of impressive beauty my wonderful friend.. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan

Charles Messina
Date: 7/16/2018 8:06:00 AM

Dear Susan, it is as precious as your lovely comments! They always put a morning smile on my face...Thanks for kind words and your kindness...As always, warm wishes to you dear friend...Charlie

Heidi Sands

Date: 7/7/2018 7:28:00 AM

This is true, very nice Charles :)

Charles Messina
Date: 7/7/2018 7:39:00 AM

Thank you, Heidi! have a wonderful weekend!

Lyric Man

Date: 7/6/2018 10:09:00 PM

I love this, Charles!

Charles Messina
Date: 7/6/2018 10:25:00 PM

Thank you, Lm I'm not sure this is actually a senryu, this is my first attempt at this form. Much appreciated!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/6/2018 10:50:00 AM

Hello Charles Messina I do believe these words. Because true love is so hard to find. When i find it again I will hold onto it and never let go. have a nice day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 7/8/2018 10:42:00 AM

Yes that is so true. Have a nice day my friend.

Charles Messina
Date: 7/6/2018 11:34:00 AM

Hello Darlene De Beaulieu, You are so right it is so hard to find, and when we find it, we must grasp onto it tight. But you never know where or when, sometimes you'll find it when you least expect it. Have a wonderful weekend my friend.

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