Leigh Nickolyn Poet I do not know?

For Beau

Beau
                 For Beau
             My closest friend

A shadow cast over
A broken head stone,
Dropping to your knees 
A cry is let out.

She was only a child
When her last breath was taken,
The fault to blame
Was this rough sea 
Called Life.

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Black Eyed Susan April 26, 2011 at 6:01 AM This may be fine for your intended audience, Beau, but for me, I need more details. I think your poem has the potential to be powerful, but the way it ends now is so general that it doesn' t leave much of an impression on me. If it works for Beau, great. This is just my two cents.