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For Beau

Beau                  For Beau              My closest friend A shadow cast over A broken head stone, Dropping to your knees  A cry is let out. She was only a child When her last breath was taken, The fault to blame Was this rough sea  Called Life.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 4/26/2011 6:01:00 AM
This may be fine for your intended audience, Beau, but for me, I need more details. I think your poem has the potential to be powerful, but the way it ends now is so general that it doesn' t leave much of an impression on me. If it works for Beau, great. This is just my two cents.
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