For Barbie - At Qualicum Beach

I remember children's laughter 
carried on the breeze.
I remember wading in ocean water,
barely to our knees.

We'd walk for what seemed like miles
on days when the tide was out
trying to find deeper water.
It was there, we had no doubt.

Soft sand between our toes,
dodging a crab or two.
Giggling and splashing in warm waves. 
That was me and you.

Those were magical days
and that beach still looks the same,
especially when the tide is out
and the ocean looks so tame.

When I smell the fresh ocean breeze
and it ruffles my graying hair,
I think back to those days 
and I wish we both were there.



22/08/2014 for Barbie's 59th birthday tomorrow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Lamoureux Avatar
September 2, 2014 at 12:35 AM
This is a delightful write.
Dietrich Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 1:24 PM
I just love this one. To remember a friend so fondly and it's so nostalgic, Francine! wow, her birthday is just a few weeks away from mine and I'll be 59 too!!!
Amadore Avatar
August 23, 2014 at 9:45 AM
A nicely limned memory...we all have these (or should have) to enjoy. I liked your poem.
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