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For a While

For a while it seemed everything was going swimmingly Goodbye to concerns, doubts and all the things killing me For a while the worries grew more distant every day I remember only feeling sad when the sun went away To wake up and no longer feel the world on your chest Breathing everything new and exhaling the stress Having the ability to concentrate with nothing on your mind For a while it seemed I had nothing but time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 7/25/2025 6:45:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 12/28/2017 3:21:00 PM
I enjoyed your poem. Very nostalgic feel to it. Well done, Liam.
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