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Footprints of Peace

Footprints against golden grains, whirls mar reflecting ocean glass The world moves without a breath, sunshine stroll the full green forest The night is dark and full of terrors, will the cold soul find peace 5/30/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Sijo Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/13/2020 6:49:00 PM

great ambiance in this one, Eve. your pen is golden. Congrats on the win.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/12/2020 7:06:00 AM

Thought provoking muse Eve! Your soothing imagery gives a glance into that picture you paint. Congratulations on your win :)

Jenish Somadas

Date: 6/12/2020 1:15:00 AM

Wonderful write Eve..will the cold soul find peace..a thought yet to be answered..Great Sijo..Congratulations Eve..

Sam Kauffman

Date: 5/31/2020 6:34:00 PM

A feast for the senses my friend! Love the phrase "the world moves without a breath." I pray that peace is your companion. Blessings! Good luck in the contest.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/31/2020 8:44:00 AM

Peace will come when we all of us love embrace, my dearest friend , Eve! Powerful write! Blessings!

Silent One

Date: 5/31/2020 6:04:00 AM

We all search for peace... I liked your sijo.. I hope you are well..