Footprints In the Snow

Notes played by the wind sounded like 'Taps.' A sad song without lyrics, expressing lament Sorrow pelted me like crashing white caps Beneath the fading light of the sun's descent darkness gathered in a leaden sky as I whispered with tearful breath, "Goodbye." So many words we'd left unspoken when fear prevented us from speaking Somewhere along our journey we were broken, never discovering what it was we were seeking. I laid a rose from my garden then turned to go. One set of footprints imbedded in the snow. Behind me arose the baleful cawing soaring in the sky, a flock of ebon crows Tears coursing from my eyes as if I were thawing The wintry world held me in its throes. On I walked, pathway lighted by the moon, listening to the notes of 'Taps,' a haunting tune.
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Daniel Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 6:18 AM
A touching poem, Jenna, I have to fave this:)
Logan Avatar
February 27, 2023 at 7:14 AM
I'm so pleased you like it enough to fave. Thanks, Jo!
Koplin Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 5:54 PM
Very powerful and wow an amazing write!
Logan Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Many thanks, Mark.
Parker Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 2:37 PM
Your first stanza is a powerful visual stand-alone poem, the mood of this poem is haunting
Logan Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:41 AM
Hi Frederic and thank you for reading me. I always enjoy your visits.
Gentile Avatar
February 25, 2023 at 1:34 PM
Sometimes, sadness in solitude is very beautiful Jenna! Your moody write serves well to excite that feeling and I really enjoyed reading it today! Happy Saturday xxoo
Logan Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:40 AM
That's true. Thank you very much, Mike. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
M  Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:33 PM
Wow Jenna….hauntingly beautiful!! Debx
Logan Avatar
February 26, 2023 at 12:39 AM
Thank you, Deb.
Green Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 2:47 PM
This poem was haunting, very soft, very quiet and like a whisper it wrapped around me. A bit sad, lonely and cold but so beautiful in the process. I love so much about this...fantastic my friend.
Logan Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 3:01 PM
Your kind thoughts are so wonderful to read. Thank you ever so much for responding to my lines, Chris.
Kyser Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 10:41 AM
I like the sestets, and in particular, the line, 'tears coursing from my eyes as if I were thawing' - stages of grief unfolding...
Logan Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 10:47 AM
Thanks for pointing to a specific line you liked, Jeff. I appreciate your comments.
Cunningham Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 7:50 AM
Quite a bleak scene Jenna, I can feel the sadness in your verse. Tom.
Logan Avatar
February 24, 2023 at 8:04 AM
It is bleak, Tom and I have no idea what served as the impetus for those lines. Thanks for reading me. It took me longer to find a photo to go with this one than it did to write it. Strange.
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