Footprints In the Snow

Notes played by the wind sounded like 'Taps.' A sad song without lyrics, expressing lament Sorrow pelted me like crashing white caps Beneath the fading light of the sun's descent darkness gathered in a leaden sky as I whispered with tearful breath, "Goodbye." So many words we'd left unspoken when fear prevented us from speaking Somewhere along our journey we were broken, never discovering what it was we were seeking. I laid a rose from my garden then turned to go. One set of footprints imbedded in the snow. Behind me arose the baleful cawing soaring in the sky, a flock of ebon crows Tears coursing from my eyes as if I were thawing The wintry world held me in its throes. On I walked, pathway lighted by the moon, listening to the notes of 'Taps,' a haunting tune.

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Date: 2/27/2023 6:18:00 AM
A touching poem, Jenna, I have to fave this:)
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/27/2023 7:14:00 AM
I'm so pleased you like it enough to fave. Thanks, Jo!
Date: 2/25/2023 5:54:00 PM
Very powerful and wow an amazing write!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/26/2023 12:41:00 AM
Many thanks, Mark.
Date: 2/25/2023 2:37:00 PM
Your first stanza is a powerful visual stand-alone poem, the mood of this poem is haunting
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/26/2023 12:41:00 AM
Hi Frederic and thank you for reading me. I always enjoy your visits.
Date: 2/25/2023 1:34:00 PM
Sometimes, sadness in solitude is very beautiful Jenna! Your moody write serves well to excite that feeling and I really enjoyed reading it today! Happy Saturday xxoo
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/26/2023 12:40:00 AM
That's true. Thank you very much, Mike. Enjoy the rest of your weekend.
Date: 2/24/2023 3:33:00 PM
Wow Jenna….hauntingly beautiful!! Debx
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/26/2023 12:39:00 AM
Thank you, Deb.
Date: 2/24/2023 2:47:00 PM
This poem was haunting, very soft, very quiet and like a whisper it wrapped around me. A bit sad, lonely and cold but so beautiful in the process. I love so much about this...fantastic my friend.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/24/2023 3:01:00 PM
Your kind thoughts are so wonderful to read. Thank you ever so much for responding to my lines, Chris.
Date: 2/24/2023 10:41:00 AM
I like the sestets, and in particular, the line, 'tears coursing from my eyes as if I were thawing' - stages of grief unfolding...
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/24/2023 10:47:00 AM
Thanks for pointing to a specific line you liked, Jeff. I appreciate your comments.
Date: 2/24/2023 7:50:00 AM
Quite a bleak scene Jenna, I can feel the sadness in your verse. Tom.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 2/24/2023 8:04:00 AM
It is bleak, Tom and I have no idea what served as the impetus for those lines. Thanks for reading me. It took me longer to find a photo to go with this one than it did to write it. Strange.
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