Footprints In the Snow

I heard a knock on my door, late last night.
It came six hours before daylight.
My dogs didn’t bark, no leaps and bounds.
They always lose their minds at the faintest sounds.

When I got out of bed, they didn’t even look.
They were completely relaxed, not the least bit shook.
I went to the door to see who was there.
I saw a man with a beard and long brown hair.

I opened the door and invited him in.
I could see blood on his brow and cuts on his skin.
I thought he had crashed, somewhere out in the night.
Then my eyes were filled, with a circle of light.

He said he had come, just to simply remind.
He said to look in my heart and share the love that I find.
Then he was gone, I felt the cold wind blow.
I could see his bloody footprints, right there in the snow.
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Krutsinger Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 4:17 AM
Jesus must be smiling at this one, for I am too. "He said he had come, just to simply remind. He said to look in my heart and share the love that I find." Wow!
Koplin Avatar
January 23, 2021 at 8:26 AM
I hope he liked it and I'm glad that you do. Thanks Caren!
Horsman Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 9:38 PM
Wow, such a touching soul reaching poem.
Koplin Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 3:00 AM
Thanks Harry, I appreciate that!
Allison Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 12:59 PM
such a touching piece Mark the ending gave me goosebumps, exceptional poetry my friend:-) hugs Jan xx
Koplin Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 3:32 PM
Thanks Jan! I’m glad you liked it
Kitchin Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 6:18 AM
A beautiful poem Mark, love the last stanza, very touching, well done!
Koplin Avatar
January 18, 2021 at 7:38 AM
Thank you so much Tania! I’m glad you dropped by!:)
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